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TheFimFicCritic


From the state of Ohio. I am 25 and a certified S.C.U.B.A Diver. I enjoy writing poetry and have intentions only to give support to writers and hope they will support me

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  • 335 weeks
    The drive is back!

    Well... I have to say I am glad to have my drive for writing back. The stress of 2017 was a HUGE killer for me. As you are no doubt aware, this is me announcing that my year long hiatus from writing is over. Screw 2017. I'm not sure what changed, all I know is I got home from work and started writing, next thing I know 40 minutes in and I'm at 1,257 words for my next chapter. Expect an extra long

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  • 356 weeks
    Sorry for the time between chapters.

    The start of my 2017 wasn't great... My Great Aunt passed away... Then a month later I had another family member pass away. Then after that another month went by and my Great Uncle passed away... I took that pretty hard. Him and I were close... Two months later my Grandmother passed away. I went down to her house and arrived literally 10 minutes before she died. I couldn't watch. But once my

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  • 384 weeks
    I Wrote A Thing... Not Pony Related But Shantae Related.

    You sit back on the deck of your house in beautiful Scuttle Town, feeling the sun’s rays on your skin. Eyes closed, hands behind your head, just taking it easy.

    “Bolo! Oh where did that boy go?”

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  • 389 weeks
    Wow... Over 100 followers.

    I never expected that to happen. Im glad so many of you enjoy cuddling is the best remedy so much to follow me. Even though I hardly do anything with blogs. Other than to update you guys on when you can expect the next chapter.

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  • 396 weeks
    I should have chapter 10 of cuddling is best remedy by the end of November.

    Now I am sorry from the long hiatus from writing. But I should have something by the end of November. Cuddling is the best remedy is not dead everyone, I promise. Life has been getting in the way. So now I am ready to dust off my keyboard and give some ideas I have a try.

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Jul
5th
2015

Found Something Interesting In My High School English Folder · 2:53am Jul 5th, 2015

So While Digging In My Old English Folder I Found Something Very Peculiar. An Unfinished Poem I Wrote During Study Hall Because I Was So Bored. It Was A Poem About Rainbow Dash. Please Note It May Suck... Okay It Does. Incredible To See How Much My Writing Has Evolved. I Also Found Several Fics I Did For Practice. All Of Them Nearly Terrible, But One Half Decent, I Wont Post It On FiMfiction, But I May Put It In My Blog Sometime In The Future.

The warm body pressed against my chest,
Warms my heart with joy, love, and pride.
Her cyan fur, rainbow mane and tail I do not jest,
Her hooves looped tightly around me makes my love unable to hide.

Her name is Rainbow Dash,
A Pegasus mare.
An attitude and personality that is confident but brash.
A heart of loyalty, gold, and full of the love we share.

To betray her would be the death of me,
And as close to me as she is now, I would never let it cross my mind.
Even when we met the thought was impossible to see,
Not because we were friends, but because it was evil and unkind.

Even as I lay awake and Rainbow sleeps,
She still manages to make my heart flutter.
Either she nuzzles into my chest to get closer and make my heart leap,
Or she sighs in content before whispering my name before she shutters.

The small things she has make my heart beat for her,
Her gentle smile, my heart beats to see;
Her magenta eyes, shine more vibrantly than a blooming rose;
Her breathing as she sleeps, while I hold her close.

That's just to name a few.
Never will I hurt Dash.
Never again will she be alone to start a new day.

Yeah I Never Finished But I Can't Help But Feel It Could Have Been Better.

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