Something I've been working on...

Okay, so as a favor to a friend, and a personal challenge to myself, I offered Fourshadow up a heroic version of "Under Our Spell" for his story linked below. And this is the finished product. Thoughts and comments are appreciated.

EA Shattered Rainbow Rock

• Equestria Girls
• Adventure
• Drama

In another dimension, Sunset Shimmer and the Rainbooms are now sending fear and panic to the students of CHS. But maybe three sisters may put an end to that...

• Alt. Universe
• Other
• Sunset Shimmer
• Dazzlings
• Main 7 (EqG)

FourShadow · 88k words  ·  189  14 · 5k views

Now here you go...

[The Dazzlings]

Oh-whoa-oh, oh-whoa-oh

You didn't know that you fell

Oh-whoa-oh, oh-whoa-oh

[Adagio Dazzle]

Now that you're under our spell

Blindsided by this amazing beat

You're now going on to clapping your hands, stomping your feet. Yeah, clap ‘em, stomp ‘em boys!

You didn't know that you fell

[Sonata Dusk and Aria Blaze]

Oh-whoa-oh-oh-oh

[Adagio Dazzle]

Now you've fallen under our spell

[Sonata Dusk and Aria Blaze]

Oh-whoa-oh-oh-oh-oh

[The Dazzlings]

We've got the music, makes you move it

Got the song that makes you lose it

We say "jump", you say "how high?"

Put your hands up to the sky

We've got the music, makes you move it

Got the song that makes you groove to it.

We ask "jump", you ask "how high?"

Now come on! Put your hands up to the sky

Oh-whoa-oh, oh-whoa-oh

You didn't know that you fell

Oh-whoa-oh, oh-whoa-oh

Now that you're under our spell

[Adagio Dazzle]

Listen to the sound of our voice

[Sonata Dusk and Aria Blaze]

Oh-oh, whoa-oh-oh

[Adagio Dazzle]

Soon you'll find you’ll have a grand time

[Sonata Dusk and Aria Blaze]

Oh-oh, whoa-oh-oh

[Adagio Dazzle]

Captured in the web of our song

[Sonata Dusk and Aria Blaze]

Oh-oh, whoa-oh-oh

[Adagio Dazzle]

And then… Soon you'll all be singing along

[Sonata Dusk and Aria Blaze]

Oh, whoa, oh

[The Dazzlings]

We've got the music, makes you move it

Got the song that makes you groove to it

We ask "jump", you ask us "how high?"

Put your hands up to the sky

We've got the music, makes you move it

Got the song that makes you prove it

We ask you now, "jump", you ask us "how high?"

Now then… Put your hands up to the sky

Oh-whoa-oh, oh-whoa-oh

You didn't know that you fell

Oh-whoa-oh, oh-whoa-oh

Now that you're under a spell

Oh-whoa-oh, oh-whoa-oh

You didn't know that you fell

Oh-whoa-oh, oh-whoa-oh

Now that you're under this song’s...

[Adagio Dazzle]

Spell

Comments

[FourShadow]

Still looks great buddy.

I'll be sure to leave you big cred and shout out when I get this into a chapter

[The Bricklayer]

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Thank you.

[FourShadow]

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Daww, come here ya teddy bear!

*hugs*

[The Bricklayer]

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*Snuggles into hug*

[FourShadow]

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Yay, hugs.

And fluffy doggies!

[The Bricklayer]

4784880
Somehow you manage to worm your way into my heart with fluffy huskies...

[FourShadow]

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I love fluffy doggies

Its one of my weaknesses, honestly

[The Bricklayer]

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Same here, usually kittens and cats grasp my heart, but Huskies are a soft spot with me.

[FourShadow]

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Huskies are so freakin cute, I wanna hug em

[The Bricklayer]

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Yeah, I'd love to own one, if not for the fact that they're so damn big when full grown, and here in Florida... They will shed a lot.

[FourShadow]

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Oh, that.

Honestly I'm cool with big dogs, and the shedding isn't an issue with me.

[The Bricklayer]

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You have yet to see a Husky shed. I have.

[FourShadow]

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Oookay then