Short Thingpone story

I wanted to let you all know about a story that I recently completed. It is in a different universe than BlossomThing but it is about a friendly Thingpone and Anon and Thing's mischievous tricks she plays during Nightmare Night (Halloween). This is my first ever complete story. It took me almost 2 years to write, hehe... I mostly wrote it for 4chan but I also want you to enjoy it.

My Pastebin: https://pastebin.com/u/chucklefarts

All chapters:
Part 0: pastebin.com/XULqtjCn (based on image)
Part 1: pastebin.com/7ajiubXQ
Part 2: pastebin.com/QxddJGs0
Part 3: pastebin.com/ARTd3wwW
Part 4: pastebin.com/MWiux8Zx
Part 5: pastebin.com/Y1cj8mCj

Please let me know what you think of the story and if I should post it here on the Fimfiction site. Does it need work or do you think it is good enough to post here? Thanks! I hope you are having a great day!

Edit: Also, the 4chan thread that I posted this in is called the Strange Waifu Thread and it has a Discord group you can join if you want: https://discord.gg/gHUaV25

Comments

[Nectarine]

I'll have to wait until I get home from work in 6 hours but I'll definitely take a look!

[QueenieChryssie]

It's a cute story, don't see why you shouldn't post it!

[chucklefarts]

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Yeah, I was more asking if you thought that my grammar and such was good enough to post.

[QueenieChryssie]

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Ah! There was only one significant error that I noticed, but I can't find it now. Additionally, 'it's' should be 'its' at the end of chapter 4.

[Nectarine]

So it took me a bit longer to get around to it than I thought it would, but it's a nice story. I think you should post it.

[Malabazoo]

Your anonthingfilly is a fun one, any plans to add to it or blossomthing?

[chucklefarts]

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yeah, I have plans

[Malabazoo]

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Totally looking forward to it