Idea

Hey, so I've hit what's called a writer's block on this story - and I was thinking - would you guys like to suggest one or two things you'd like to see in the story? It'd help with my thinking process, tysm!

Comments

[VilkaTheWolf]

Hi Sinner! Binged all your story up to date in one go. One thing I need to see is Twilight's friends see her scar, like her illusion thingo fails. Continuously keeping up that illusion must've been a big drain on her mana. If she didn't have to cover up her scar anymore she'd be at full power again. Really just wanna see her go all out.

[iAmSiNnEr]

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O_o, yeah, I could streamline that up :D

And thanks for the follow!

[sykko]

She's gotta to be suffering from untreated PTSD. You could have her friends start noticing noticing unusual jumpiness or being overly on guard or having tremors and/or mood swings, especially when facing something that triggers her. Maybe she's been self-medicating just to make it day-to-day and from time to time her friends find her passed out drunk or incoherent. Maybe Spike or Starlight stumbles in on her crying and unable to stop. When untreated, PTSD is a horrible thing for someone to go through, which is why suicide rates are so high among veterans and victims of abuse.

[stag the story teller]

You could do a crossover with the Twilight blows things up series

[Luna-my-favorite-pony]

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Exactly what I was gonna say.