Tweaks and Changes · 2:37pm Sep 24th, 2022
So, I've done some rethinking on the last chapter of latest story, and had done some changes to not only improve its mystery element, but to also connect it to the sequel. So, if you read this post, kindly have a look at it and see if it improved. I written out the out-of-the-blue interruption and gave the ending a more ominous and uncertain ending.
Just reread the ending myself. Much improved, I feel! Really brings a more ominous ending to the story.
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Thanks!