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November submissions

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TEquestria's Martial Warrior
MLP: FiM
Romance
Adventure
Comedy
Follow along Leo's adventures as he is transported to Equestria! Gaining power, exploring beautiful landscapes, and heart-pumping action! What else could a man dream for!?
Violence
Gore
Profanity
Human
Alt. Universe
Rainbow Dash
OC
Main 6
Charson · 40k words · 140 14 · 2.7k views
TQuick! Distract Chrysalis!
MLP: FiM
Romance
Random
Slice of Life
"Anon, you must distract Chrysalis for us so that we could grab that bell! You need to get her attention somehow- wait! What are you doing? That's not what we meant at all!"
Second Person
Main 6
Chrysalis
Anon
Mare Of Mystery · 3.2k words · 1,273 80 · 27k views
TEquestria's Hitman.
MLP: FiM
Dragon Ball Z
Dark
Adventure
Drama
[Displaced] Hello, my name is Hit, and I'm a Hitman. I serve under no one and I always finish the job. I serve for the highest bidder, who ever pays enough, will find their enemies head at their doorstep. I am Equestria's Hitman.
Gore
Sex
Violence
Death
Profanity
Anthro
Crossover
Human
Celestia
Cheerilee
Main 6
CMCs
King Sombra
The_Chill_Author · 39k words · 139 20 · 4.5k views
TThe Hero Club
MLP: FiM
Drama
Mystery
Slice of Life
After being charged with assault, young Gusty Breeze is released into the care of an estranged aunt. The last thing she wants is to get in trouble again. Unfortunately for her, circumstances have other plans.
Alt. Universe
OC
Mind Jack · 46k words · 34 2 · 701 views
TBloodhound: The Mare in the Mirror
MLP: FiM
Drama
Mystery
Thriller
Bloodhound struggles to prove that a shocking death in her family is actually murder.
Violence
Gore
Death
OC
Mind Jack · 56k words · 23 1 · 270 views
TRunning Off the Rails
MLP: FiM
Drama
Flash Sentry is stuck in a time loop on a train.
Narcotics
OC
Flash Sentry
daOtterGuy · 14k words · 60 0 · 761 views
TBlood of the Phoenix
MLP: FiM
Warhammer
Drama
Sci-Fi
Thriller
A strange set of armour has been found in the land of Equestria; and with it comes a prophecy. A prophecy has been told in secret, a prophecy that is set in stone and is already in motion. A Phoenix rises.
Gore
Violence
Death
Anthro
Crossover
Alt. Universe
Twilight
Spike
Luna
OC
Main 6
Violet_09 · 34k words · 20 4 · 781 views
TUpon my horn
MLP: FiM
Dark
Comedy
Horror
Sometimes a tennis ball on your horn is not what it seems to be.
Gore
Violence
Izzy Moonbow
sevenofeleven · 6.4k words · 453 views
TJTHW: Journey To Hearth's Warming
MLP: FiM
Romance
Adventure
Mystery
Trapped by a spell Twilight and Starlight must live through the events of Hearth's Warming. Only the events aren't playing out exactly like the history books. All while a mysterious wendigo makes a move that might changes the future they once knew.
Violence
Gore
Anthro
Alt. Universe
Twilight
OC
Other
Starlight Glimmer
Starswirl
Lighttone GryphonStar · 281k words · 56 8 · 2k views
TAccidentally In Yeet
Equestria Girls
Romance
Dark
Comedy
Sunset Shimmer and Wallflower Blush just started dating. Everything's been going well so far, except for one thing. One nagging suspicion that Sunset can't seem to shake. It doesn't help that Wallflower keeps giving her ample opportunities to worry.
Sunset Shimmer
Wallflower Blush
Gay For Gadot · 14k words · 257 10 · 2.8k views
EDreams' Horizon
MLP: FiM
Drama
Slice of Life
How far do you think a dream can take you? For Twilight Sparkle, that question is not one easily answered.
Alt. Universe
Twilight
Minuette
Sunset Shimmer
Moondancer
Luster Dawn
DrakeyC · 94k words · 190 8 · 3.5k views
ERarity’s Blog on Life, Fashion and All Things Fabulous
MLP: FiM
Slice of Life
Rarity discusses the things she loves on her fabulous blog ✨💖✨
Alt. Universe
Rarity
My Little Pastafarian · 8.1k words · 26 7 · 462 views
TA Murder Of Crows
MLP Gen 5
Dark
Horror
Thriller
Hitch needs help to keep the town free of litter after hundreds of new ponies move to Maretime Bay. He recruits some crows to help, causing disturbing nightmares, before the feathered vigilantes begin attacking the town.
Hitch Trailblazer
Sunny Starscout
Sprout
Kaidan · 12k words · 29 5 · 573 views
EDiscord's Time Travel Trip.
MLP: FiM
Comedy
Random
Discord, facing off against the Elements of Harmony in a final stand, thinks that pulling a future version of himself may give him the edge he needs to win… He was very wrong.
Fluttershy
Discord
Main 6
Hotel_Chicken · 1.7k words · 868 6 · 12k views
TThe Haunting of Carousel Boutique
MLP: FiM
Romance
Drama
Horror
Rarity has been keeping to herself lately. Applejack is determined to find out why.
Applejack
Rarity
mushroompone · 33k words · 155 6 · 2.6k views
EIdol Hooves and The Deathly Tired Princess
MLP: FiM
Drama
Slice of Life
Why Idol and Princess Luna weren't present during the wedding invasion.
Luna
OC
Changelings
KarmaSentinal · 40k words · 654 27 · 11k views
EOn a Riverboat to the Sea
MLP: FiM
Drama
Slice of Life
Twilight Velvet and Night Light attend a riverboat cruise to the sea.
OC
Twilight Velvet
Night Light
Jarvy Jared · 14k words · 46 2 · 425 views
TThe Dusk Guard Saga: Hunter/Hunted
MLP: FiM
Dark
Adventure
Thriller
An ancient, lost empire is on the verge of returning from its imprisonment, and the Dusk Guard have been dispatched. Their mission? Retake the city, secure it, and above all, keep its ancient ruler from seizing control once more.
Violence
Celestia
Luna
OC
Shining Armor
King Sombra
Viking ZX · 267k words · 173 5 · 1.6k views
TThe Return of Sunset
MLP: FiM
Equestria Girls
Sad
Slice of Life
Sunset Shimmer returns to Equestria a bit earlier than planned.
Death
Celestia
Sunset Shimmer
Ninjadeadbeard · 7.7k words · 827 12 · 13k views
Tdead butterflies (One of Them Will Destroy the Other)
MLP: FiM
Romance
Horror
Fluttershy wants us to see the butterfly migration.
Death
Rainbow Dash
Applejack
The Red Parade · 5.4k words · 141 8 · 2.2k views
TSolar Prominence
MLP: FiM
Dark
Sad
Tragedy
There are things about the Mare in the Moon story that not even Twilight knows about; things that even make Celestia afraid. It was not Luna's nightmare that was unleashed that day... (Spiral of Fate Book 1)
Violence
Alt. Universe
Celestia
Luna
Nightmare Moon
Bat Pony
GTthe4th · 7.8k words · 108 1 · 2.9k views
TBefore Time Began to Flow
MLP: FiM
Dark
Mystery
Out of sight and out of mind, a dark figure contemplates a lost art and his past reign.
Gore
Sex
Violence
Death
Celestia
Luna
Discord
Other
Chrysalis
Humanity · 12k words · 240 30 · 7.7k views
TIn Need of A Hand
Equestria Girls
Adventure
Drama
Slice of Life
Sunset's hand has been sprained and she is having trouble on the job.
OC
Sunset Shimmer
Applejack (EqG)
Pinkie Pie (EqG)
Main 7 (EqG)
armid · 7.9k words · 10 3 · 561 views
TObsidian: Daughter of Sombra
MLP: FiM
Adventure
Comedy
Drama
Discovered after a thousand years, Obsidian awakens to a world she knows nothing of and has to learn the magic of friendship - will she be changed by Equestria? Or follow in her father's footsteps to change Equestria instead?
Gore
Violence
Death
Alt. Universe
Twilight
OC
Other
Randimaxis · 210k words · 147 4 · 2.6k views

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