Review Of A Flarity Story- Eternity By Tailalin · 2:55am Jul 30th, 2016
I'll preface this by saying that I do not do reviews for the sake of discussing technical things. So if such things concern you, while I might touch on them, don't expect anything comprehensive (or coherent) in that regard.
The story I refer to is Eternity. From the start, the characterization of Rarity is wonderful. She is concerned because of a missed appointment, and goes to find out what happened.