Darkly Familiar
written by Tyler-the-Brony
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This has promise. There were a couple of typos, and the sentence structure could have been better, but it wasn't too bad. I shall read on.
A like and a fav from me.
It was a nice chapter,but as an advice:stop using the word"Twilight"so much,especially at the beginning of the sentence.Change it with"she"or"her",instead of repeating her name so much.