BRILLIANT!
Also, I note that the scene when AJ barged into Mac's room was taken from a JohnJoesco Artwork

Oh Molestia, you perv

211476 Impressive! Someone caught it quicker than I anticipated.

I don't think trusting Twilight with that secret was a good idea. I assume it won't be long before it slips out and the whole town hates Mac for taking Fluttershy's innocence.

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That, or they endlessly needle him with "O MY CELESTIA! I CAN'T BELIEVE IT"

just as i thought
well loved the whole thing im not into this kind of fic but i dont regret giving a chance to this one because talks about how realtions happens and grow
well cant wait to see more

and twilight... i dont know why but im not trusting in her in tis fic for some reason

Twilight was way out of character. Fluttershy isn't THAT innocent.

Wow this is really good! Did not expect that last chapter to be so detailed lol. Great read

taking all bet's here: how long will twilight keep the secret?
1-1000 chance she says for the rest of the story, 1-2 chance that she spills the bean in the next chapter and 1-100 that she spills the beans in chapter 6. this betting was sponserd by pinkie pie's pie store

what? someone had to say this?

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Hate to say it, but... that was the last chapter.

212640 oh. well in that case... ARE YOU KIDDING?! please continure with this! i don't know make a sequel or something with mac and shy having a family or something like that. PLEASE CONTINURE WITH THIS!

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I... don't know. I have ideas for other stories, but nothing really about FlutterMac specifically. I'll make another blog post addressing it in a few days.

212715 well i don't want to put anyone in a situation were they feel like they have to make a certain story.
i just really like this story that's all and i thought it was going to be a lot longer that's all.
i'm sorry anyway.

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It sort of seemed like you set it up for a couple more chapters with Twi's discovery
I'd definitely like to see a continuation but don't feel pressured to make one, especially if you've got some other ideas in mind.
Anyway Bravo, your definitely on my watch list

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I ain't mad. I ain't even disappoint.

212835 well it's just it was one of those endings that bassicly said " there will be another chapter or sequel." like the ending of avatar except this one didn't annoy me as much. i guess i just hate it when any writer puts a ending that dosen't look like a ending at the end of there story that's all.

*Clop* *Clop* *Clop*
AHEM! I mean, *Clap* *Clap* *Clap*
I was clapping with hooves, nothing more!
Also, when you write the next chapter...
WHAT THE...
Are you kidding me? This is the last chapter? My space fire monkeys tell me such behaviour is unacceptable!
Now, after bathing in the rays of your awesomeness, go and write another story.
Please...

wow now i realize about this been the last chapter.... well my friend this was a great stroy, the ending its really good and open for a sequel but we wont put pressure on you if you decide to continue this well awesome or if you do side-storys thats great too anyway this was really good and cant wait to see what you'll do next

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Yeah, it might have helped if I had changed the status to "Complete" after I uploaded that chapter. Oh well, it's been fixed now. Glad you and so many others enjoyed.

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You seemed to have a Twilight jealousy thread and AppleDash story going. Maybe develop those?

Nicely done, an honest fic with a cute ending. And for the record, the dominate Fluttershy was a nice win.

Very well written. The fact that you took the time to give both characters some time to develop before the payoff was great and well executed. Definitely putting you on my watch list for future fics.

Omg can't stop laughing xD
I read clop because it's bloody hilarious (to me), but you misspelled "shaft" as "shat" xD
I don't entirely think my mum believed I was laughing that much at a Facebook status.
"He replied, noticing his shat finally becoming flaccid and relaxed before him"

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Oh my, how embarrassing.

Thanks for pointing that out. It's been fixed.

i must admit....this is good......

Loved this story!
“Y’all shoulda warned me, Big Macintosh! I mean, what if it had been Applebloom!?”
"… At least Applebloom knocks.” You got this from a picture didn't you
I love my shipping fics and this was no exception
Kinda funny to see Fluttershy taking control back there
-Glassed

SHUT UP AND TAKE ALL OF MY STARS!

But seriously really well done romance! and hell, the clop was well done too!
But why u no make more?!

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Yeah, it's from JJ. Are we allowed to post pictures like that here? It's not NSFW since he's covering himself, but I wouldn't want to get in trouble anyway.

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I'd love to make more, but for the moment I can't think of anything else I could add to the story that wouldn't be "And then Big Mac and Fluttershy had EVEN MORE SEX and it was MAGICAL". It's all in my blog.

224377 I should think we are... I'm not sure
-Glassed

at 1 point in reading your story i started reading it in a western accent i dont know why
love the fic

That was beautiful. Totally written in character even during the special scenes it was uncanny.

When Twilight "figured out" what happened, I totally pictured this face:

i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh66/stylie77/Spongebob-RapeFace.jpg

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I wasn't really thinking of that when I wrote the scene for my story.

twilight.ponychan.net/chan/fic/src/132203054200.png

The scene with Twilight was an EXCELLENT tag onto the end of all the romance. She tried to sneak a peek, hahaha! XD

At first I balked at Fluttershy's bedroom talk, but then again... she is sitting on a powderkeg of inexplicable rage, unleashed when animals don't wanna be her friend. Sooo... I guess I could certainly see her as a sexual dynamo when she finally gets into things. She and Twilight share that category in the bedroom of "its always the quiet ones you gotta watch out for", which you give to us in spades. The sex scene had a little too much talking in it, folks don't usually talk that much during love-making, but hey they're ponies so meh.

This was a good strong piece and I'm glad I read it. Cheers!

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Well normally I only edit these fics for grammar and punctuation errors that readers point out for me (which I very much appreciate) I don't really do story editing itself. I am however planning on coming back to this story and revising it a bit so I can submit it to EQ Daily (with the "clop-lite" version of chapter 4 of course). They seem to be very picky about what looks proofread so they don't have to do it, and I want to do them proud. So I'll be going over all of these comments to see how I can apply them and make this story even better.

oh man this is a great story...can you make a follow up please

I suppose im the onlypony who noticed the "The End" I loved this fic and even though i ddint want for it 2 stop i think you ended it on a great note! Il have to deffinenetly have to check out more of your stuff. well i mean.. stuff you have..written

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Actually, it wasn't there before: I edited it when everyone expected a sequel.

I'm glad you want to read more. I'll have some other stuff added within the week, I hope.

20450 agh I feel lik a jackass lol hehe but watch out il be tracking you mister

please tell me going to write more fluttermac stories like a sequel to this one

please tell me there is going to be a sequel to this. I would be sad if that doesn't happen.

Brilliance. I enjoyed the incorporation of that scene between AJ and Big Mac from a comic I once saw.

I thoroughly enjoyed the story telling, it was very well put together, the plot was at an excellent pace and never let me with a dull moment.

Thank you for the read.

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Gosh, with the way people are asking for it... I don't know. I can't really write a full story with chapters to continue this story. The whole point of the story was to explain how their relationship formed and... had sex. Now that that's done, there's not much else to tell.

I might be tempted to write an epilogue, about them having some morning sex, but I'm wondering if that might just be beating a dead... tree.

317867 Glad you enjoyed it, I had so much fun writing it.

318115 (cloperella) yay thank you. Also who got the proofreading job?

265561Stay out of her shed... or else.

Totally one of the better ship fics.

Seriously, other than some things a good editor would have no trouble fixing, it was a really entertaining slice o' life piece. I tend to hate those, yet loved this.

Only thing I didn't like was how drawn out the play part felt. Really well done, portraying a story within a story, though~

Best Fluttermac ever. Amazing story and the final chapter was incredibly 'in character'.

Such a sweet story. Amazing work. 5/5

Molestia was watching them O.o

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Felt like something cheesy that could be used in the show. I went with it.