I'm a writer, not sure what my standing is really on the fandom, but my friend is a hardcore brony, so I'm giving some stuff a try.
Gabriel is dead, killed by Gwyn, Lord of Cinder. He awakes in the Undead Asylum to find himself hollow, yet strangley, he is not insane, in fact, he has every control over his mind and body.
Freed from his cell by an odd young stallion called Malakai, he sets out on a journey with vengence burning in his unliving, unbeating heart.
The horrors of the outer world will be realized step by agonizing step, and Gabriel will learn more about himself then he'd ever hoped to.
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Excellent! A Dark Souls crossover.
Quite beautiful, yet sinister game, really. Let's see if you can type up some interesting stories.
About time someone did dark souls crossover.
And i lift my hat to you for using the best RPG to do it.
(skyrim isn't that good)
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Sinister indeed, I'll definitley try to entertain ^^
209835 Thank you^^ Personally I liked Skyrim, but Darksouls was such a stark contrast that well, it was irresistable xD
I like the concept so far, and don't mind the rating. Probably a troll negative. Though, I will hold off on voting myself until we see more.
However, you need a little bit of editing. A space between each paragraph would make things slightly easier to read, and some sentences sounded awkward or incomplete. Other than that, your writing seems fine to me. Follow up those mistakes and you've got excellent writing. You've got a track.
And yeah, Dark Souls is the best.
211247 Ah, didn't even notice the rating thing^^'' Hope that doesn't deter too many people. And yeah, I'll try and improve the spacing, thank you for the tips and advice^^
Few minor type errors can be seen in the story but nevermind that, i'm thinking its going to be like 'chapter between bonfires' but umm.... whatever you wanna do is fine.
223989 Ah, thanks for the heads up^^ And the chapters don't have a set start and end per-say, but that doesn't sound like a bad idea.
Oh..... I want more