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EXOLIEF
I mainly write porn, it's all in good fun.
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damn that was hot and terrifying at the same time....
I have the weirdest boner right now.....
Felt kind of heartless. Sombra uses mind control in some vague way that makes Shining Armor have sex with him. End of story. Didn't really do it for me.
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The premise for this seems original (at least I've never seen it before, FWIW). The execution could have been more polished, though. Sorry if that seems harsh; I think you were going the right way with it, it just needed more.
Thumbs up for the interesting idea of Sombra/Shining.
I must say that it came out very different than my idea, but then again, I doubt most people would have liked my idea that much considering that it had quite a bit of...well...torture, tears..ya know FUN FOR THE WHOLE FAMILY!.
I did like the sex, it was simple but effective.
The ending felt a bit rushed tough, I guess the fact that SA was instrumental to Sombra's downfall and him still calling him "his King" even afterwards just feels a bit odd. Could have used a bit more internal conflict over that.
All in all, it's much more descriptive than anything I could have pulled off and it most certainly passed the boner test.
So, this would be the second time something like this happened to poor Shining Armor. I'm surprised that with all the brainwashing he's gotten his mind hasn't been completely bleached out at this point.
Well, at least he's already had some practice with this..!
I love to see SA suffering. That's pretty much all I can say
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I think he secretly likes it.
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I'm afraid you might be right. It doesn't help that Chrysalis likely made what he liked before irrelevant, since she had more than enough time to hardwire a fetish for being under mind-control into his brain. So, poor Shining Armor is twisted inside like a wind-up doll, and Sombra happened to insert his key into his hole!
That- sounded less dirty inside my head...
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You just gave me an ever weirder boner than this fic has ever given anyone.
Congrats!
I feel as though this story could continue to Cadence and Twilight but that's my personal opinion
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I'd hate to continue a story idea that wasn't mine in the first place. Plus, I dunno, I was sick, my priorities were all outta whack
2631043 Then how about giving it a twist then? Remember your Discord story and what he would've done differently? Why not do the same thing here just replacing Discord with Sombra?
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Cuz it will be repetitive and redundant?
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As much as it sounds rude, it's completely accurate
I aspire to never do the same thing twice. Even the upcoming expansion of It's Magic is taking on a life of its own. The whole "Alternate scenario" thing has already been done.
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I can't wait to see that happen. And I'm going to regreat it... I fucking know it
Kinda short, but I still got a decent fap out of it.
I like it
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cool!!!
Damn magic, always messing up ponies.
On another note, I rather enjoyed this. I'm not normally one to read M/M but when I do, the stories tend to be good, this included.
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Better than being terrible, at least
If those links are NSFW you should probably get rid of them I think that's forbidden, maybe, but I know something involving NSFW is. Love the story by the way, odd but interesting
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I seriously need more of this.
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(I vote someone make a sequel and in a alternate universe king sombra won and shiney is pet. yay
That was really good!
2630294 2629357 Damn right he does!
5615426 I just might take that bet and run with it!