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BluePhoenyx


I'm back with a new name and a new passion for writing! A phoenix will always rise from the ashes

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Efraffa is lost, and Owslar Captain Snapdragon is badly injured. He limps to his death, and finds Lord Frith in a river. Frith, however, has other plans. He uses the river to take Snapdragon to new world beyond the downs, beyond Efraffa, beyond everything he knows to a world ruled not by man, but ponies and, consequently, the arms of a pink and yellow pegasus and her white rabbit with an ulterior motive.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 17 )

2815683
thanks! I thought it was pretty rushed too but I couldn't figure out what else to do with it. I promise next chapter will be slower and better thought out ^_^

2816623
Thanks!!! I noticed there was a serious lack of this kind of crossover so I decided to change that! I hope you enjoy it

Angel and Snapdragon, fight to the death, I can see it now.:pinkiecrazy:

2943763
And may Frith bless you for that wonderful comment!:heart:

Well, this is interesting. A shame it doesn't seem to have gone beyond two chapters, as I think there's plenty of scope for this particular crossover. I also think Fluttershy and Angel are an ideal pair to encounter this type of rabbit.

I do have to agree with the "rushed" comment: you won't win many fans among WD fans by consistently misspelling "Owsla" like that! And as a real nitpick: Watership Down is set in Britain, where we don't have blue jays. I doubt Snapdragon would know what kind of bird was chirping as he woke up.

I did like that nightmare Snapdragon had of being brought before the Council. Made me think just a little of poor old Blackavar. I also smiled at his "What's a cutie mark" rejoinder when Fluttershy asked him about Frith. All in all, it may not have been perfect but I'd have read on if there'd been more.

3768107
Hi! thank you so much for the comment.

I do actually intend on finishing this story it's just i got a new job and school and family issues have gotten in the way.
the misspelling of Owsla is actually due to spell check changing it at the very last second when i tell it to "correct all misspellings" and I don't see it so that one is my bad.
as for blue jays, yeah I know they don't live anywhere near there but I figured he'd at least know what a blue colored bird is, kind of working with creative choice here. kind of. I do try and make my stories as geographically correct as I can and make all my animals as biologically technical as i can but of course some things just fit better than others.

as I said I WILL be updating this, I just need life issues to settle down first. I'm hoping to have the next chapter out by the end of next week.
p.s long live blackavar!

3772591 That's good news: I'll keep an eye on it! :yay:

I must say something, before I read this, I have loved Watership Down, and now the idea of a pony/Watership down crossover, is awesome. Thank you.:twilightsmile:

"What is a human"? Classic
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3839262

well you're very welcome ^^ as I said before I thought it was a very serious issue that there was not a cross over like this (that I could find at least) I hope you enjoy it!

Admittedly, it is a shame this was never really continued. You can't ever find mlp fanfictions based off Watership down.

May the Thousand always be there for your soul Richard Adams.

In the hope that Hazel shall join Snapdragon...

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