When scootaloo gets curious about her family history she and the rest of the cmc's go in search for her parents and try to find out as much as possible from ponies everywhere. But then they discover big information from scootaloos family history and things start to get interesting.
Sorry this chapter still isent finished but i published it anyway so it would save.
by the way i had to use this title page cause i couldent find a better one so on this title page thats not exactly what going to happen.
Chapter is finsihed!!
i also changed the name of the chapter
ok this isent exactly a comedy but i dident want it just to be adventure its kinda a mystery
I'm excited on how this story is progressing and is willing to help in any way except writing. Still trying to figure out how to make the faces [face-palm]
I am 1 year older than yo and you write better than me. A few speech marks missing here and there but a great fic.
I will be working on another chapter soon. And I'm sorry that some of the writing is not perfectbut I'm still learning hope you enjoy the rest of the story
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That would be awesome if you could help with the story. I'm pretty sure I know what I'm going to do for the next chapter.
>>Cuteclaws101
Then you know who to call, but just be aware that I have school to yaknow.
Looks like this chapter is going well so far. I wonder what the full version will wholed. Sorry for the misspelling on this comment. Forgive me please.
Sorry that i havent done the rest of the story but i will soon. and thank you.
im sorry that the next chapter is taking so long i have just been really busy. i predict that it will be out in amatter of weeks or one week.
thank you
Once again I'm so sorry that this chapter is taking so long. Honestly I haven't even started it yet
. but it will be done I'm hopping to start tomorrow or later today. And thank you to all who have read my start of my story
, much is apprciated
Well there you have it folks the third chapter hope you enjoy and please read the authors note as well as comment and like
the idea is sound but the writing is horrible .
3282923 actually? no. i don't vote any story up or down o.o i think stories can only get better depending on the author. theres no point voting up or down
yep im that way to
3286218I I know right
3288873 LAZY PEOPLE UNITE...........later
3291214haha,lazy people rule
3292540 yes, yes we do
Iwasjust reading through my story again and I noticed alot of spelling mistakes, I'm awfully sorry, I will work on that after I finish the story. It may take sometime because the chapters are so short
Any way I'm letting you know that I'm not meaning for this story to be rushing but this is my first story and I'm not expecting it to be perfect. I hope you are enjoying it and if you have any suggestions about the story people,ease mail me or comment. Thx bye.
oh my god, i havent written anything in over a month!
im soooo sorry, im just tired of writting, cause im really lazy, plus i dident expect that many people would read it. thanks so much for reading it though.
i pinkie pie promise to do another chapter soon, and feel free to nag at me for not writing quickly enough. i would actually like that very much. so just yell at me in the comments do to another chapter if you like my story. i would also appreciate if you could mail me any ideas for the story.
Hey every brony an pegasister, thank celestia this chapter is finished. Im here to tell you that i will be starting up a new fanfic about the cmcs only its a romance and a slice of life. So once i start that please feel free to read it!
Its Babs not Bab's.
Oops sorry thanks for telling me I will edit that right now
Ahhhhh, 3 hours of writing that and finishing the sixth chapter is a wonderful feeling, I hope u like the chapter and come back later to read more
Sorry that's it's written poorly but I'm still learning.
such a mysterious pony oooh!
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Writing does take a lot of focus, Heck I can't even think to write for my story, I just keep getting brain farts
cliffhanger damn!