So I had this idea, it's been stuck in my head for a long time now. But here it goes. It's the future, and Twilight has been in the mental hospital for several years due to mental instability and psychotic ramblings. Her magic has been somewhat the same, except sometimes she casts certain spells without realizing it or completely by accident. The story tells of how she went from being unstable to having her friends help her "back on her feet".
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good story
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Thanks
Seems to be off to a good start.
Pretty interesting. I'd like to see more.
I love the occasional story taking concepts from a Beautiful Mind and I am excited to read this :D
Thanks for all the great comments. And I hope you will keep reading.
omg this is awesome, moar!!! :OOOO
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lol I can't believe people actually like this stuff.
I came up with this in the shower and I can't believe I'm actually continuing with this. Btw, chapter 2 is on the way. I'll probably start writing tomorrow, I've been super sluggish about this since I've had a wonky sleep schedule lately.
shouldnt they block her magic?
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Well what can I say? sounds like the base for a really nice story, hope you had a long sweet dip in the bathtub for the 2nd part
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They probably should lol I was thinking more real world idealistic kind of an institution.
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lmao, thanks for your input man. I really am surprised so many people enjoy this considering I've been told that I suck at storytelling. :P
So...where exactly is Spike in all this...? Not to mention what about Celestia and Luna? I would think one of those two would do something, ESPECIALLY with Luna's Dream Walking ability...
ah i wonder who is the dark guy? a parasprite??? king sombra??? dont miss the next exiting episode of "Wonderful minds!!!"
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I have no idea. :P Just the writers at Hasbro, continuity doesn't exist here. j/k
But seriously, I have no idea lol.
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That we shall.
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I might explore the possibility of Spike's involvement in all this soonish. :3 we'll see lol
All typos have been edited btw.
oh really nice chap, but the name of the chapter totally eludes me, who is twilights apprentice?...............MAGIC!!!! *teleports away*
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It was supposed to be Spike.
I apologize if it wasn't obvious.
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Its ok, maybe I just didnt catch it, great chap anyway
An awful large amount of TELLING rather than SHOWING. Instead of telling us(wasting words) that rainbow dash is in the wonderbolts or fluttershy has a zoo, you could wait tell later in an appropriate time in the story to introduce this. Like if rainbow met up with applejack at the mental institute wearing a wonderbolt suit.
WHY wouldn't she just TELEPORT out of the cell, and why could she use magic? Why would they let her be unguarded? Even the most modern facilities still have areas where dangerous patients can't escape or cause harm. I'm sorry man, but this is a huge plothole in the story.
Hiii im glad you updated, not 2 days ago I was wondering about this story
ill read it after work *saves* ^__^
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Updated to chapter 7, enjoy.
This fiction is really, really rushed. Care to slow down?
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I did my best to pace this story as best as possible, nobody's perfect. At least it's not as bad as Studio B at times.