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Letters Home

Private Jeremy Hawkens sends letters back to Celestia; some involving updates on the war, some involving personal letters to his family and others for Celestia's study.

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mdonnelly

mdonnelly #1 · Feb 24th, 2012 · · · Registration ·

They are short for a reason.

Leoheartxx2

Leoheartxx2 #2 · Feb 24th, 2012 · · · The Interview ·

Hmmm.....not sure....

your story is INDEED too short to start with.....i cant feel the intention or where this story might be leading....

sry dude but im not tracking this at all.....Although your grammar mistakes are quite at the minimum....good work

Lieutenant Bubbles

Lieutenant Bubbles #3 · Feb 24th, 2012 · · · The Interview ·

This looks like it could be going somewhere fun. I really enjoy seeing that Celestia has a sense of humor. Hopefully future installments will have just a little more length, i feel like i'm stopping in the middle of a conversation, but other than that, well done!!!!

mdonnelly

mdonnelly #4 · Feb 24th, 2012 · · · The Interview ·

254475 & 254517 Thank you. I should explain that the first two chapters were more of a short and not draw out introduction for no reason. They were more ment to set the mood and show how it started.

Night06