Rainbow Dash's pet, Tank, was killed by a unicorn, who decided a lighting spell was best to practice in the open.
How can she live with this injustice? How can she live with her unicorn friends?
How can she live without Tank?
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Aw, nuts. I was gonna write something with the same premise (Tank dying, Rainbow moving on), but you beat me to it.
No dislikes, though. You get yourself a favorite.
Keep it up, dude/dudette.
3120649 Aww! Thanks.
aw dam it why do I read these when they make me cry? Oh well u got ur self another fav.
Well, I think I'm going to regret reading this for the feels that will no doubt ravage me for reading this, but now I need to know how this will turn out. *Braces self for impact*
Really good. *sniff*
Liked and faved
I did notice one thing.
I think you mean fourth.
3122713 Oops! Thanks for the notice. ^^'
I don't agree with the way he died, I think it would have been a lot more heartbreaking if it had been of old age rather than a spell gone awry, but this is still sad none the less.
The sun had risen
I think you can reword it to, though it would only reach a few places until..........
built
the trees that surrounded her.
Except, simple mix up of letters
was seems to work here, but I think you can go with were
worse.
bathe.
Repetition of body, you can leave out the second "body" and it will still work
It isn't called Halloween, it's Nightmare Night
Repetition of where she's going, you can replace the second one with just, She flew across the town as she headed for her home.
Itch
an accidental, instead of a mistake
Gosh, such a long comment.......
*ahem* Another good chapter, and happy I can help.
i may have to watch this. its pretty good though i think perhaps your auto correct is kinda fucking you.
3129774 I don't know. I wrote it in April, so it's untelling what I was doing.
3128788 In future chapters you will see why I chose the unicorn route.
Will there be an update soon?
3718530 Hopefully when my schedule calms down, but it will be on my to-do list.
Please don't tell me this is going down a path where Rainbow Dash is going to go all psychotic on all unicorns.
Glad to see this updated in any case.
5185593 Nope. Just racist.
Oh, Rainbow Dash, you fool. I feel sorry for you, but that is not the way to handle poor Tank's death. There are serious consequences in that path. Anyways, great to see this thing updated.
...By the way, pine-heads? Don't you mean 'pin-head'?
5186654 Only thing I could think of in that moment. I wanted to finish it while I still had the passion.
5186654 Also no. It's not suppose to be pin-head. It's pine-head.
5186672 5186678
First response: It's okay. We all have those moments of trying to get something out before something kill our motivation. I have that experience way too often myself.
Second response: If that is what you want, go for it. Kinda curious to why, but I have no problem with it.
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I might not feel this strongly, but it's just bad. Don't try to be M. Night Shyamalan.
5187159 Don't worry. It might seem like she'll go crazy--like she did in Chapter 1--but it's actually going to turn into hurtful, racist words against unicorns.
5188706
Well then I stand by my gif.
T-t-tank d-d-ied?
CAN I KILL THAT UNICORN FOAL!!!!???????
5598061 He's not a foal, unless I said otherwise and forgot. So, go ahead.
poor dashie, losing her pet tortoise