Applejack, Element of Honesty, Proud family member of the Apple Family...
She's the Cowboy, Southern Mare we all know as AJ...
But she wasn't only AJ...she was Arma...Daughter Of the Greek God.....Ares..
And on AJ's Sixteenth birthday...a prophecy is reawakened...and a old enemy sends AJ to Earth....To Camp Half-Blood...
Now AJ will have to live at this Camp...until she can find herself a way to get home,..
But will she want to?
it is good
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You exaggerated their accent a bit too much, but otherwise okay!
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I thought so you can't be so sure
it's begun. Nice chapter otherwise though...
Love the story!
You seem to be reiterating Applejack's name a lot when it doesn't need to be, especially near the beginning...
*begun*
Last chapter, to much accent, this chapter, to little accent in my opinion.
Also, Angel* Not Angle.
But great chapter nonetheless!
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Thanks the Accent is very difficult for me but I can't believe on how many people like this
3195687 I hate when I read a story and someone does that. Gets on my bucking nerves. The angle/angel thing.
3196896 Heh, don't blame you.
Ah'm Applejack, and Ah talk like this.
That's how I do the accent.
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Sorry for that
Hear doesn't have demigods.
I take it she'll be turn back into a human again, right?
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murr
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Murr what?
3203149 Yes?
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Eyup
3203596 good. Any demigod powers? Ha know, besides skill and strength?
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Easy....she has the power of-wait a sec! I AM NOT A SPOILER ALERT!
You nearly trolled me...good job my dear sir....good job
3203760 Troll ololololollol olo! Olo..........olo.
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3203927 olo!
I hope Flim and Flam know that the Apples would never sell the farm.
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3206272 On a serious note: what does even mean?
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It means
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OH NUHUH!
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3208825 Story with emoticons.
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3211634 Now to publish this story.
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Say wha?
Please explain more
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Please take your time understanding.
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....HOW THE HECK-I-WHAT?!
FIRST COMMENT!
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Hmn...it was...ok...
Alter-me:FLUGGELHOW!
Me:...Ignore whatever just happened.
TT...TT errors...so many errors...so many dead puppies...
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And that's why I need a proofreader
A. #BestLine2013
B. Its Ah'm
Also, you misspelled Answers in the Pool of Answers