On one starry night Princess Luna stares at the stars in her beautiful sky. She had suffered what most ponies can never dream of. Banishment, pain, sorrow, hate, anger, all those emotions all at once.
Princess Luna is still not treated as Celestia, no, she is still feared, still hated, and still ignored. But Luna can only just stare at the skies and wish for someone like her.
Who knew Applejack would be the one?
*Reads title*
Heh....
*Says in a really cheesy voice*
Get to tha choppa, err Princess!
i like it
I think it's Good. From the sound of your discription, it feels so sad and, Wonderful! Looking forward ya work, cowgirl!
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Thanks! also Shell Applejack is gonna kick you for that
Great story, luckily I love both Applejack and Luna, I have always thought them as equal and caring to each other, don't really think applejack as a background pony because she did have two episodes and maybe more all about her, so I think she is a bit more then just a backround pony. Don't ya think? can applejack like somehow come to dreams with luna with other people an sow her things luna does since being keeper of dreams and stuff. I think that would work possibblily.
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Good, good. But grammar! FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU-
Very beautiful, men.
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I enjoyed this
Faved and liked......oh and before I forget have a mustache
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IT'S Pretty good, but what about GRAMMAR?
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Yeahhhhhhh I'm shy askin people to help me some habits die harder than I thought
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Hey, do u have any more stories like this Ah like urs
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Whelp I don't really but I was thinking of doing a Twilight and Celestia one but I just really want a proofreader more than doing that story
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CoolCan't wait!
This is amazing