Twilight, in an effort to help Applejack and Rainbow Dash achieve their dream of having a foal together, casts a spell that, unbeknownst to the princess, envelops all of Ponyville and plunges the little ponies (and one dragon) into a vortex of unknown genetic exchange and unplanned parenthood. What's more, the solution may come with severe complications of its own, and thus Twilight finds herself tasked with finding a resolution where there is likely none to be had.
Editing and cover art by Bico.
Chapters (1)
Oooh this sounds good.
Been waiting for this one for a while now. Awesome to see it finally released. Good job!
Oh dear god.
This... this promises to be ridiculously awesome. And weird.
Well, nyah-ha-ha! The joke's on you! I love this story! The emotions are real, the timing perfect! I love this story! Faved to see more!
I... I love this story!
I... I love this story?
I... I love this story...
What happened to me...
sounds interesting but...
why u pick THAT one as title image?
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I wonder that myself. A lot of people tend to judge a fanfic by its cover, which is a tragedy because the story itself is actually really good.
I will hesitantly follow this story. It's interesting enough, despite male pregnancy making me scratch my head.
Just read it. This is an extremely good story so far. I gusta. Keep it up.
Twilight got everyone pregnant, dood? SURE!
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Aww, admit it: you two are just upset that Twilight didn't do it using her giant futa cock.
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It's okay, I got a nice futascratch fic I'm working on. There will be a glorious amount of thick, throbbing horse phallus plastering Octavia in truckloads of cum.
That said, futa Twi would have been fantastic.
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3577408 Now that you mention it... I am a little butthurt that Twilight isn't making other ponies butts hurt when she fills them with baby gravy, dood.
Oh Hell YES. XD Target Identified.
TARGET = THIS STORY.
TRACKING THIS TARGET!!!
Oh, dear Sweet God.
This... I don't even.
But...but...wha? This...wha...preg...what is this...I-I don't even.....
wha....
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Reads like a hot ginger tea sweetened with a dollop of honey.
Mpreg aside I think I'm going to favorite this. Its too hilarious and possible a situation not to.
...beg pardon?
*Edit after reading* .....okay. Since I can safely assume that this isn't going to go past somewhat risqué "comedy," I think... actually no, thinking has become very hard all of a sudden. I'll just leave this be for now.
I'm too scared to read this.
Is Twilight pregnant to and simply hasn't noticed? Or is she not?
Wahaha. Oh, I can't wait to see more of this.
More. Now. The Rated Ponystar demands it.
This is the greatest thing I've ever read, I look forward to more!
I will read this just to see how your perspective of pinkie being a mom is
I came for Pinkie Pie. And cause I was curious, but mostly cause I was bored as heck.
I'm going to be watching... to see where this goes. It looks like a good story. Althought the Mpreg is kinda... disturbing.
Well, I'm slightly put off by the male pregnancy here... but the rest of the story's premise and its execution is more than worthy of upvoting, favouriting, and following the heck out of it
Just... get rid of that damn cover artEdit: I approve of the new cover image!
AHAHHAHAHA! Oh God! This is brilliant! Ponyville is about to have a baby boom. I wonder how far the spell went? Wonder if Zecora was affected.
Needs more m-preg.
What about ... Granny Smith?
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This is one of those
I don't understand what the hell is happening yet i still like it!?
you have confused me internally.
Or maybe that's just my stomach...
Dammit twilight!
I'll agree that the cover art is certainly...odd.
The M-preg doesn't bother me as much as it probably should. If I had to hazard a guess, Twilight didn't place a proper limiter on the range of her spell. As for the spell's incantation, it's a dead ringer for the Green Lantern Oath.
Nerd!
Though, I hate to nitpick, but the verse is off in the fourth line, with one extra syllable.
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> “I don’t think I can be a good mom. Er, dad. Dam. Um, mod?”
Actually, you were right on the money with Dam, RD.:twilight smile:
> “Can’t be nervous bout’ somethin’ that ain’t happenin’ yet.”
Umm, AJ, that's definitely not how it doesn't work.
And I learned a new word! Or I will once I go back and check what it was.
Tracking because of comedy purposes.
Also, you might wanna make it a little more clear that a week has passed since she cast the spell. I was rather confused when Spike mentioned it had been a week, especially since no other indicator had been given up to that point.
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Edit: But seriously, I love this kind of shit. Also, does Spike get gender bent or... oh what do I care it's rated teen. Can't wait to read this latter.
Everypony is pregnant ... except for Twilight ... I wonder, can alicorns just not get pregnant? or is Twilight the only pony in town Sleeping Alone?
This fic deserves to get featured, congrats on making it to the featured box!
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This comment deserves a reply, congrats on getting a reply!
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Excuse me for interrupting, but where would you like me to hang this lampshade?
Aaaand check! *ticks box*
... I think I laughed harder at the author's note than in the story itself. Spite-writing, hah!
Commenting again because that's the kind of guy I am:
I really, really like the characterization. It feels show-true, barring some of the subject matter. And actually, I can totally see this as an episode if they allowed things like homosexual relationships and pregnancy and male preggers in the show. Good on ya. Also, did Twilight accidentally use her own genetics as the catalyst somehow? She did say the last use was with Princess Platinum and how everyone was distantly related to her ... and she doesn't seem that pregnant. Just saying.
That title image made me laugh. I don't know why, it's horrible.
Seems that Twilight just solved the problem of a population decline...
Well now, THIS is certainly something new! Totally faving this, btw!
Well, if it used enough energy to kill a normal unicorn and only got one couple pregnant it wouldn't be very good at increasing the population would it?
Oh my god this is hilarious... XD
Man, you write great AppleDash interaction. I really hope that your focus will stay with them
(And that after this, you write several more AppleDash fics :p)
Must not laugh...must not laugh...must not...BWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
The sheer ridiculousness and cheesiness of it all makes me love it! It's even my catchphrase: if it's cheesy I love it! And you have to be real good for me to like a fic with m-pregs!