Pinkie Pie wakes up to every pony as...babies,including the princesses! What will happen to Equestria as the ponies are babies? And who are the the mysterious ponies that Pinkie Pie finds?*WARNING:THERE WILL BE SONGS.AND BABIES.LOTS AND LOTS OF BABIES*
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Wut is this I don't even
Is this even a fic? I can't even tell what this is.
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should be everypony not everyone
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Wat did i just read?
Um...
No.
The fact that this has 6 thumbs up makes me very, very sad.
The songs didn't even make sense. They didn't rhyme, if they did it was through repetition, they had no meter or rhythm... This whole story is rather fractal-like, in that respect; the songs are accurate representations of the whole thing.
What the @#!#!@ is this? I don't know how this got through moderation!
Ok I shall read this fanfic
Ok..,
Ha ha
3410849 Well I'm sorry you are not satisfied and read the authors note that is in the first chapter unless you never look at those that goes everyone
3412171 Can you say that again, please, but comprehensibly?
3412171 i'm sorry but that jumbled section kinda bothered me. i would advise looking into it and spacing out each word intended so as not to cause confusion.
Nope
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There is a difference between a fic and a string of random actions.
3419536 Are you calling my story a string of random actions?
If anybody has some editing tips, post them now, please! I will appreciate it!
(But don't tell me to delete my story)
3410849 the songs were meant for you to make a rhythm
What did you expect a youtube video?
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I tried. When writing a song, you've got to make sure that the number of syllables are the same between lines or it doesn't work, any concept of rhythm falls apart.
3430362 Make it like a parody of a song...
...although some can't be made into a parody...my opinion...
3420240 He is, by the way.
3478515 What? Sorry, what are you even trying to say here?
Nevermind,read next chapter. Fluttershy has a sister?
Very fun story
I like it so fair
I like the last part
Who's Stardust? and I still like the story
I don't like the singing parts Mrs.Dust
3670938 Far from it FARRRRRRRRR from it
3670972 Dusk Shine is Twilight Sparkle but a Brony
3671039 No but if she is than your the queen of ugly ponies
3671066 Alright if you don't want me to bully you then leave my pic ALONE
3671099 Well don't compliment anything