I'm just a 19yr old student from Germany, who wants to contribute his part to this amazing fandom.
This story is a sequel to Lyra - Origins
Thanks to Rambopvp for the amazing cover art!
I’d happily die, if I know that I’ll take her with me. I mean, what should I do after all this is over anyway? Once I get my vengeance, my life has no sense anymore. I lived for just one task: Punishing Sunset Shimmer.
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Good story, but there is one fact I just can't understand. Why is it that every story Lyra and Bonbon are lovers, I thought there supposed to be best friends. I may be wrong tho.
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Because everybody loves lesbian ponies :D
Seriously, I wanted to get the reader to have a feeling of how deep the emotions inside Lyra are and that these feelings turned her into what she became. There is a difference between losing a close friend, even your best friend, and losing the first person that ever accepted and loved you the way you are.
I can't believe that I missed this story before... Did you began working on it just after Lyra: Origins?
Well, it's time for me to sink in!
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Yeah, I started working on this one right after I finished Origins, and I wanted to get it complete before uploading the first chapters, so I just uploaded all of it together after finishing it.
3532016 Well, this shipping is rather common, equally common as Vinyl x Tavi I'd say.
There are weirder ones out there, like Cadance x Chrysalis, or even Discord x Flutters (ugh).
Part of the fandom, mate, anypony can be shipped, even Snowflake with Blueblood (sweet Celestia's plot, don't let it happen!)
I finished reading it right now and I'm... Well... Impressed!
Finally a hero, who takes a life for every taken one.
And you ended it like there will be the next part (Lyra fighting with herself?), but also like it's the end of the story at the same time. To be honest, I don't know which option would be better.
However, you did exactly what you said, and you did it very good. Great work, have my like+fav :)
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First of all, thank you very much ;D
Actually I'm not sure if this is the end, maybe I'll continue this someday, but at first I want to focus on my newest story, Diary of a DJ. I also thought of remaking Lyra - Origins, because I wasn't really that happy with the story. I'll see
3558394 Alternative version without all those dark/tragedy tags, I assume? Well, it should be nice :)
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Actually, no :D I thought of a longer version, it just went all too fast and seems a bit mixed up to me, so I'll just extend it all, explaining some of the background and so on, but not changing anything of the actual plot, so that it still fits to Unleashed. But we'll see, maybe someday I'll brighten it all up ;D
3558652 Well, that also will be nice, why not?
To be honest, you're right, the story was kinda short, especially the "Epic Battle of Epicness of Epic", but making it longer not by rewriting it, but by adding another point of view... Interesting solution, I'll surely see how it goes.