Rainbow Dash has lost a bet with Applejack, she now need to do a months worth of work on the farm.
What can go wrong ... or right? A whole month stuck with the Apple's might not be as much fun as you think it will be. Follow Rainbow as she find out, just what farm life is like, in her case anyway.
Entry for: A disagreement of sorts.
*I was given permission to use this cover image by Yetioner*
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Thanks
I'm pretty sure it officials out now ^^
MacXDash OTP!!
Amazing story! But you already knew i loved it! Can't wait to see more of your work!
It seems pretty nice, but the grammar and spelling seriously needs help. I could barely tell what was going on.
I only have one problem with this. the day after Mac came back, Applejack spontaneously grew hands. Or a hand.
Either way, it's bloody creepy.
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Yush!
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>.> I didn't notice that, I shall find it and change to hoof
seriously grammar and spelling fix it!!!
almost ruined the the story for me.
almost.
you saved with this macdash.
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Sorry, I don't really pair most of the main 6, and that was the first name that popped into my head
It was a pleasant read, there are plenty of mistakes but the inteanded meaning was clearly noticable so It didn't detract from the cute little story. If you ever need a proof reader, you can always push it past me if ya want. small example is the word 'torcher' is supposed to be "torture." and "in-tack" is supposed to be "intact" you wrote a good story, having an editor go over your work will help you improve by making mistakes like these known, as well as pointing out corrections.
I loved this story...but what was Spike doing on Heart's Warming?
Oh well, MacDash is always appreciated. Have a yay
The story is pretty goddamn cute, Karma. I enjoyed it, but...yep...you need someone to help you iron out all the grammatical/spelling errors. I can help you out, if you'd like. I don't at all mind one bit.
4756361 Pft i'm to lazy for that shit, I'm leaving it like this and working on a story that matters ^^
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"Heheheh...durrr....*drools* "Okey dokey, artichokey! Buh bye now!" *waddles off while eating entire box of urinal cakes*
And thus it went. Hross, the "special needs author", stumbled off into the desert sunset with his box of urinal cakes in tow...never to be seen again...for...you see...halfway in route to his destination...he tripped on a rock and smashed his head against another rock. Then coyotes ate his bloated, rotted corpse. And then the vultures picked clean what was left. Both groups of animals later succumbed to urinal cake poisoning. There was no funeral, because no one liked that retard or his stories to begin with. Except retards like KarmaDash...*ahem*...woah. *cough* *cough* Got something caught in my throat there.
4760059 not funny dude
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C'mon...hehehe...it was pretty funny, Karma. C'mon! *Ben Kingsley voice* Laugh with me! We shall laugh until our bellies ache! Haha!
I'm sorry but that put a dirty thought in my mind!!!!
Anytime I come across this story, I just wonder what exactly the bet was. Not the stakes, but what they had to do