Twilgiht feels bad about treating Rainbow Dash the way she did so when she goes too apologize her life changes in way that she never would have thought.
Lol... That's what I call a pretty awkward situation Twilight is in now. Though I still have no idea what that Scarlet pony is up to/ if it is real/ etc....
I usually scoff at people who get worked up during football games, so it surprised me when I realized I'd been yelling at the screen during the Scarlet parts. And the thing about the more a pegasus female flies, the more attracted to other mares they are? It just doesn't seem realistic. But then again, I'm reading about a pony romance, so why do I care?
4190055 Yeah I think I could have worded that better I might go back a change that a bit. Also if you don't mind me asking what exactly did you say during the Scarlet parts?
although i think there's a few grammar and punctuation mistakes in the description at the end there, fantastic chapter!
Great story to the point I can mostly ignore the grammar and spelling errors I'd love to read with those fixed it would be excellent then
Lol... That's what I call a pretty awkward situation Twilight is in now. Though I still have no idea what that Scarlet pony is up to/ if it is real/ etc....
ok, I'm curious now, about what will happen!
I usually scoff at people who get worked up during football games, so it surprised me when I realized I'd been yelling at the screen during the Scarlet parts. And the thing about the more a pegasus female flies, the more attracted to other mares they are? It just doesn't seem realistic. But then again, I'm reading about a pony romance, so why do I care?
4190055 Yeah I think I could have worded that better I might go back a change that a bit. Also if you don't mind me asking what exactly did you say during the Scarlet parts?
4193451 Mostly just a bunch of "NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! REMEMBER RAINBOW!!!!!!!" Something like that.