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Secrets and Lies
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Secrets and Lies
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She brushed on the pony’s lower back as she continued, “I can’t explain it, I just feel... safe around you. The media plays you all out as an international crisis, as if you all were terrorist or serial killers. A lot of people–and once including me–believed that because we had no other proof otherwise. Please forgive my hostility... And if someday we could all look back at this as a whole, someday try and forgive us.” The pony smiled and nodded her head slowly.
“I’ll try... I thought the same way with every other human, but I too was wrong.” Lavvy returned the pony’s smile with her own as she reached for the sinker and pulled the plug off of the drain. As the water began to exit out into whirling fluid, Lavender reached for a towel and began to caress the mare’s head dry. As she rubbed the towel roughly against the mess of a hair and carefully around her horn, she whipped if off and the pony’s mane frizzed into a ball of fluff and tangles.
Seems like a huge jump to trusting each other, despite the fact that earlier they were intensely weary of one another. Still, the story seems quite interesting, and the backstory seems solid. One thing I might suggest though is to change the 'Comedy' tag of your story into something else, as it doesn't really seem like a comedy story so far.
True, but a few paragraphs before I tried to reconcile the factor so I could move the story forward a bit quicker. I might consider removing the tag if watchers continue to note it after I release a few more chapters. Thanks for the input, I appreciate it!