Contains diapers, regression, and all the related stuff. If you are not into that stuff, my apologies. Please do not dislike solely for the regression.
Saying this now, as some people are incapable of reading more than a few sentences. DustStorm does not, and never will, have a relationship with any canon character. Luna is a mother figure to him, not a lover.
Does not contain porn, clop, or gore.
Feedback would be appreciated. Constructive feedback only.
Luna is concerned for DustStorm's emotional state, and his rising levels of stress. She has an idea for a cure, and knows he needs it, whether he wants to admit it or not.
Please note that DustStorm's traumatic memories are always highly based off my own. They are not made up to make him seem more dark, the memories and major facts are true.
Where are the story tags?
3801216 adding them in later, I don't want to put a wrong tag by accident.
So these memories are things that happened to you in the past...that's so sad
(This may be guy) Here's a hug for you man.
3802436 Thanks.... It's people like you that keep me going. And my friends. I try to smile through everything bad, because just because someone had a bad past doesn't mean that they shouldn't try for a happier life.
Aww great story! I like the direction it's going in and it's really sweet to see Luna taking the role of a mother.
And I'm sorry about your past...I couldn't imagine what you've been through.
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Thank you. I really appreciate your concern. Truly.
Oh, and some characters might be added in and out of the story, depending on if I edit their roles in, or out, respectively.
Another sweet, heart-warming chapter. Good job.
So cute.
Thanks for all the likes and favorites people, and thanks for your kind words. I'm trying to update daily, but as I work on this very late at night, usually around or past one AM, I may be too tired some nights. But I'll do my best to update frequently.
Yay! Dust caught a thief in the act! And Luna is such a good mother to her new "son"
Haha! Cute chapter! Especially at the end
Sorry to end it, but I felt I should end it before I run out of ideas. Over ten chapters were cut, but DustStorm's adventures with regression are not over yet. And plus, I felt that DustStorm's regression was imminent by bathtime, as he couldn't even remember what about his past was so fearful.
Terrible OC? Check. Romance with a canon character? Check. I think my job is done here. And that's not even touching the topic.
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But Peppy! It
and also, it
How could you not be enthralled by it?
3831731 While I'm a huge fan of terrible fetishes and not porn, I just absolutely love terrible ideas more.
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Ah, makes sense to me.
3831759 Almost as much wonderful sense as this.
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I doubt that you even read it at all. There are no hints of romance with Luna at all. Unless you're implying that sons have a Sexual relationship with their mothers. Which makes me pity you.
Cheers for the feedback though. Not very constructive, but feedback nevertheless.
3831887 Oh, that makes it so much better.
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Well, if you don't like it, you're free to leave a dislike, and mature, productive feedback, instead of prejudiced and sarcastic comments. We're all adults here.... Oh, poor choice of words on my part. Heh.
I still think you're a cool person. Everyone has their interests, and things they hate. I don't blame you for disliking my story. It simply didn't suit your tastes, and I'm fine with that. I hope your day goes well, and you find stories that you enjoy.
3831923 Eh, I'm honestly surprised you didn't flip your shit. Kudos. I'll withhold my downvote for that. Even if the story is a horrible idea.
Beautiful story, I loved it so much. If only we could do this for all adults who were abused as children and are still finding it hard to cope. I'm so sorry about what happened to you.
It was a very sudden ending, could of had more chapters, but it was a great ending.
I really enjoyed this story! I cannot wait to see more from you in the future!
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"It was a very sudden ending"
Yeah, that's what I thought, too. :/
I really should have wrote more, thanks for the feedback.
Oh and it's fine for Meekoli to be treated like he is not a living thing
Ale for Meekoli
Meekoli had very hard time... But he got through it when he read this
Meekoli is sad now that it is over
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Don't worry, more stories with DustStorm and his friends have been made, and more are coming! I appreciate your support!
Ok i don't know haw this store got in my favourites but i'm glad it is
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Thank you :) I appreciate it.
Sign me up for a glass of Hard Apple Cider
nice little easy read.
I like how Luna didn't just decide to regress Dust Storm out of the blue and without his consent.
Dust Storm knew the spell would turn him back into a baby, and make it so that he would have to grow up again. It should've been obvious that he would need to wear diapers. In fact, why didn't Luna put a diaper on him the night before?
A foalsitter huh? I would say it's Cadence, but something tells me it's not.
Crystal Rain got outsmarted by a foal. If that's not the definition of an epic fail I don't know what is.
3831631 Well, I think that makes perfect sense.
3811655 If Celestia sings while taking a bath, I shudder to imagine what she does when using the toilet.
Luna had better make sure to keep an eye on Dust Storm so he never has to find out.
Glad to see that the regression changed Dust Storm for the better.
Ohhh
You should do another story recording what happened during the twenty years, like what friends Dust made during his childhood or something.
wanted to try something new. it wasent bad but I dont like how he just lost his entier life like that. I am not saying this is bad but he just seems overly abused. A much better option is that luna gave him some "vacation" time. as in during that time he is her foal. that way he can build happer memories on top of the bad ones and still be himself. again this is how I would have done it. your way is great and wraps it up in a nice bow but....I just think that lossing all of those memorys and himself....is kinda like killing him in a way.this is my only issue. still I give this fanfic a great 8/10 sorry if you think I was being rude.
How did dusk storm get his cutie mark with Luna?
3963545 I have to say very well done its funny though because I was in an rp with a similar story line
Wow this was an awesome to read I can basically can guess his life onwards with the details you gave! That's Good writing there!
ooo potin :D
nostopthisisaterriblestorywhyareyoustillreadingandfavoritingit