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DawnedDusk


Just another brony who wants to write stories.

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After being introduced to Dark Magic, Twilight has used it to her advantage multiple times(using it for Zecora's potion, finding the Crystal heart). Twilight starts to experiment with it, causing her to grow obsessed. She's noticed that its beginning to change her. She must stop herself from succumbing to the darkness before her friends loose her forever.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 58 )

DARKNESS! MAKE HER BE EVIL!!!!! :pinkiecrazy:

Omg Dashie!!! I am soooooo proud of you Because I love this story is really come off wonderful!!

P.S. it's Victoria!!! ~^O^~

3817942 Hey Pinkie! Glad you like it! You should post some fan-fiction too! I'll be uploading Chapter 2 in a little bit. I'm in the middle of writing it now. :rainbowkiss:

3818021 I probably will of course!! It will be pinkietastic!!!

well this is pretty promising and sombra is starswirl? that..... was incredibly unexpected lol good work on that

3822720 Why thank you kind, user. And also, I always wondered about Sombra and StarSwirl in the show. x3 I simply just made a connection between the two when they first introduced him. Always thought it sounded cool and seemed perfect. :yay:

3818304 It is ovbives what is happening, there talking about Srumbra.

3825015 It was kind of mean't to be obvious, since I did put him in the Main Characters. :moustache:
And since I uploaded Chapter 3 awhile ago, its just a bigger explanation of Sombra. :unsuresweetie:

I saw the picture and now I'm thinking she winds up just as bad as Sombra eventually. :twilightsmile:

This story is exciting though I already know Sombra has to be involved I want to know what happens to Twilight next. :twilightsmile:

Ok now this chapter made the story even better. Quite the :twistnerd:. Never thought about it but it makes so much sense.

3827181 Why thank you. I'm glad you like it. Chapter 4 shall be up soon. :yay:

I didn't see that coming.

3828467 Always suspect the unexpected. :moustache:

I already love this story so I'm looking forward to chapter 4. :twilightsmile:

Wow that was amazing. I wonder how the story will end.

3829364 Thanks, glad you liked it. And it shall end very unexpectedly. :pinkiecrazy: Or maybe slightly, hmm... Can't tell since I'm writing it. Oh well. I just know that one thing in the chapter specifically shall be very unexpected. :yay:

And I'll be waiting patiently to read it cause I know being pressured can make for a distraction. :twilightsmile:

Comment posted by DawnedDusk deleted Jan 23rd, 2014

great story

do you plan on doing a sequel?

3829571 I'm glad to tell you that Chapter 5 has been uploaded.:twilightsmile:

3831364 Thanks, glad you liked it. Originally, it was going to be longer, but I wish to get started on the other stories I've planned out. I wish to only focus on writing one story at a time so I won't confuse myself and eventually get writer's block. My friend is trying to urge me to write a sequel, but I think if I did it wouldn't be as good.

3831378

Thank you, I might write one eventually after I finish some other stories I have planned. Before I start rambling on about it, I can't say at the moment if I will or will not. :unsuresweetie:

+ A friend of mine also asked the same question and is begging me too. :rainbowlaugh:

3831433 I honestly felt so bad writing the scene. Why o' why did I have to do that to Luna?:raritycry:

3831457 Princess Luna is going to rule Equestria

3832404 Yeup. :eeyup: All on her own. She's basically Queen(Empress, that works too) Luna now and has rebuild Equestria since Twilight/Midnight scattered guards all over to destroy everything in sight, also giant Spike. :twilightoops:

I hope Luna can get Twilight back to normal.

3835814 Shall be a mystery if she will for now. Maybe there shall be quite the :twistnerd: in it's sequel. MUAHAHAHAHAHA! :pinkiecrazy: Whenever that will be. The stories I posted in the descriptions shall be longer than tis' one here. Except for Past Love. -Looks at index cards I have scattered everywhere containing le stories- It's about as long as this one. So much writing to do. :facehoof:

3836530 I forgot completely about Blueblood, even so I don't think he's ruler material. Princess Cadence however shall be helping in the sequel.

Comment posted by JohnHoly deleted Jan 25th, 2014

New talker = new paragraph btw

You know, I imagined twilight sparkle becoming a darker purple, her mane, and hilights a darker color too. When she gets corrupted.

“Guards, sustain her!”

This should be "Guards, restrain her!"

Rainbowdash,

This should be Rainbow Dash

Is it just me, or did Twilight's descent into darkness throughout this story remind anyone else of this song?

I just finished reading, and, wow. That. was. AMAZING. I can't wait to start reading "A Dark Infection"! :pinkiehappy:

Very good, but a couple of spelling mistakes. It did feel rather rushed. Other than that, quite interesting:pinkiehappy:

Little rushed, but I am intrigued :moustache:

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Who knew MLP and heavy metal goes great together XD. I love Metallica btw. >:)

MOVING. DEVASTATING. A TRUE LITERARY MASTERPIECE!

You killed Celestia... how dare you. (XD kidding)

"I'm sorry guys, I overslept," she apologized. "Thats new," Rarity spoke, "You usually are a bit too early for things like this." The white unicorn's comment made Twilight frown a bit.

Starts chanting.

NEW LINE FOR NEW SPEAKER
NEW LINE FOR NEW SPEAKER
NEW LINE FOR NEW SPEAKER

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