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A Sequel to Dark Magic: It has been two years after Midnight's defeat and Queen Luna is making great progress in restoring Equestria. Her progress in restoring Midnight back to Twilight is not going so well. After an unexpected draw back, she with the help of other rulers must find a cure for the darkness before time runs out.
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Have they found the ponies who committed the crime?” she asked. Rarity shook her head which disappointed Luna. How could such ponies get away with such a crime? “I’ll be sure to look into the investigation,” Luna informed her, “You and” she asked. Rarity shook her head which disappointed Luna. How could such ponies get away with such a crime? “I’ll be sure to look into the investigation,” Luna informed her, “You and you repeated that line twice
4008799 My bad. Thank you, I shall edit it now.
I have to say, that escalated quickly. Poor Lulu. Maybe the burns on Midnight came from her house, and therefore part of her life, burning down...
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And you're smart because that is kind of whats happening to her. + I feel bad every time I do this to Luna. 
I have a tendency to escalate things when writing.
4015168 There's only one thing that could make this better:
If (keyword IF) Twilight comes back to normal, there should totally be some TwiDash.
I imagine the rest of the Mane 6, especially Rainbow, being her best friend, miss her ALOT.
D'awww, she got preggers! Awesome. I like the addition of you-know-who, and he better not be here to steal Twily. That's clearly Rainbow Dash's job.
4028044 Lol. Thought she should I've been waiting for it to happen in the show. + Its time for Flash to be liked. Especially when he's not out to steal waifus.
4028679 Yeah, Cadance needs to get pregged and Twilight needs to ask Rainnbow out.
What is Sombra doing here without Chrysalis?
4054059 Being controlled by the author and being put into whacked up situations that deal with him being some sort of ghosty shadow thingy.
4054144 Okay, that makes so much sense!
Aww, poor Flutters...
It appears Twi/Midnight is cursed with the Voodoo effect; Each time something hapens to Twilight's old life, it is reflected on her body. Burns from her home burning down, the rope mark from suicide of a friend and family... pretty dark stuff here.
Wait... if Sombra releases Twilight, wouldn't she die? Or would she be free? I swear if you kill her...
4056548 I feel bad as always, but I made it my mission to make this one darker than the first.
I'll leave Twilight's fate for you to find out.
This is really dark. I liked this chapter and can't wait for the next.
4056822 REDEEM(/SAFE) Twilight I say and let her hold all of the consequences for meddling with dark and dangerous things. Make Twi herself again after Sombra leaves her and make her feel guilty for what she has done so guilty even that she almost kills herself but someone safes her
. This is what I wish to happen to Twilight Sparkle for her to not be Midnight anymore but bear(/hold) all the consequences for letting Sombra in and killing Tia.
P.S. I cant believe you killed poor Fluttershy bearer of the element of kindness
well I guess it was for the good of us all.
4058074 Don't worry about dear ol' Twi. You'll see. Everything shall still happen the way it was planned, but everything shall be just fine.
Something was just telling me to kill her. I don't know what, but it did.
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+ Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. The next chapter should be out soon.
I shall make it as dark as possible.
Already can't wait for the next chapter! Story's got me like
what are you talking about, I'm finnneeee...
4058450 Glad you like it. Chapter 4 probably will me uploaded tomorrow or Tuesday.
4058590 yaaaaaaay! And remember, I'm not crazy...
4068027 Happy to say its been uploaded. ^.^ + Embrace your crazy.
Yay awesome my fav. story has been updated but I feel like its to short of a chapter update AAAAAADDDDDD MOOOORRREEE SOOOON.
Please and no real hurry.
Ohnoez lulu! I can't wit for next chapter to see if Twilight survives.
Thank Celestia (may she rest in piece) Twilight is still alive. Still hoping for possible TwiDash, and a wild guess will be made: Twilight will break out and... stuff will happen. Or maybe her friends will find her.
4093510 ~(o.o~) -wiggly noodle arms- You never know what may be in store for
4069914 you do realize that you just gave me a new catch phrase right
I have now embraced my crazy
. Can't wait for more!
4102088 Good.
The next chapter should be up around Friday or Saturday!
MIGHT be the longest chapter of them all. 
4102204 Yes! I love long chapters!
I have hope that Twi will be rescued so they can use her help. Then Sombra will let her be rescued, because he believes that Twi will be so full of grief and pain that she will not be able to help(and she might be killed or something by luna or someone). Maybe a speech from Luna with her canterlot voice will wake her up and make her start helping the party to take down sombra.
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CANT WAIT for more chapters.
4108900 aww I hope she doesn't get killed. I mean look at this face
it's adorable 
I don't get it, is Pinkie actually dead or not? And where's the rest of the mane
sixfivefour?4125564 Thats the thing about the dream you have to remember about. -arm wiggle- Pay attention to how it played out. + You will see em' again. Soon. Very soon....
4125651 I'm not entirely certain that's a good thing... if the trend here follows, there will be moAr death. Oh well, as long as Twilight and Rainbow (and obviously Lulu and maybe Cadance and Shiny) survive and THERE'S SOME FREAKING TWIDASH
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We'll see.
4125678 You mean FREAKIN TWILUNA C:
4128669 No. I don't. I mean TwiDash.
4128683 Yeah I thought you said TwiLuna.
Good thing you dint say something like Twidash thats an okay pair but its just too commonly used. 
4125698 yayayayayayayayyayayay new chapter!!
4125698 oh my god when luna was out and she did that to pinkie I was all
then I was all
then when blue blood appeared i was all 
why blue blood not possessed then she woke up and I was all 
wait wut then I was all 
oh yea she was knocked out.
that was a long sentence. Ooh I hope pinkie's not dead. Anyway as always 
I'm sorry, I just hate possession stories with a passion. I feel like they cheaping your actions, like saying the devil made me do it. it makes redemption meaningless. I'm sorry I just can't like this story. why are possession fics so popular anyway?
4179798 Its fine. What you don't like is what you don't like. Dunno. I guess its just a thing. Like clopfics and junk.
4184249 thanks. good luck on your story though
4179798 this may be a bit late but I know that for a while there's been a show called supernatural, I'm sure you've heard of it, it's become really popular lately and it's all about demons and possession. It might have spiked the genre's popularity a bit.
4214110 yeah I've heard of it, my dad is a huge fan of it. that probably would explain it. Thanks!
More please!
Stor is danish for big. Tommer is the closest someone who isn't scandinavian can come to the word "tømmer"", which means logs of wood. Ulver is the danish word for wolfs with an "r" added in.
Wow...this is actually really good...just please let the two best princesses live(princess Luna and the Princess of muffins
o and trixie
...face the wrath of the Elements of Insanity
if any of them die...
lol
very well done man. could you take a look at one of mine and tell me what you think? Its called Shattered Harmony How Starlights Revenge affected Equestria.
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