Now the sky could be blue, I don't mind; without you it's a waste of time. Could be blue, could be gray; without you I'm just miles away.
When a threat is made against Princess Twilight Sparkle, Shining Armor gives her a guard. But because Armor doesn't want to scare his sister, the guard goes undercover to become her coltfriend. To their astonishment, it works! But what happens when the guard falls in love with the princess? (AU tag because Equestria Girls does not take place.)
This is my first real fic, so constructive criticism is welcome.
And comments are appreciated.
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Oohhhhhh I can't wait to see what happens next. KEEP RIGHTING!!!!!!!!!
Let the insanity commence. Great Idea. Shows that you shouldn't try to fake being a colt friend or people will get hurt.
I wonder how this will turn out?
What? FlashLight (That's the name of the ship, right? Anyone?) without an absurdly high amount of downvotes? What is this blasphemy?
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That's because in this story he's essentially an OC, not the boring lame asshat from EG.
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You mirrored my very thoughts. I think I'm going to give this one a try.
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still... that doesn't explain the critical lack of "FlashLight? AUTO DISLIKE!!!"
that we see on every other FlashLight fic even if their authors try to change the way Flash Sentry works
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this seems to have some promise. i'll have to keep my eye on this.
Ohhh! Nice AU Flashlight story. I can't wait to see what comes next!
Strange, an Anti-Flashlight fan, actually liking a Flashlight story. How peculiar...
In other words, I'll give Flashlight a try. It's up to you to make an anti, to a shipper. Good luck, my friend, I don't give in easly.
Wow. I'm surprised I don't have 50 down votes yet. Where are all the haters?
Interesting premise.
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Yeah I don't understand the whole down voting fics because you don't like them. Not everyone is going to like everything.
Added:
Hey look! Someone down voted my comment because I left a comment.
4031425 Maybe it's because you did something different, something that dosen't involve EG at all.
Not usually a fan of this shipping, but I don't hate it either. Wonderfully crafted story; jumps right into it. A little fast, but it's almost negligible.
Do continue.
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*Writing.
cant wait for more!
AWESOME
i can't wait for more!
You are good, I mean by the fifth paragraph, and I'm hooked.
I can't wait for more, as well as I can't wait to see what happens
4035866 I only added that because I needed more words!
Spoiler: Fillydelphia won.
Well, blimey! Someone else had a similar idea about reworking Flash Sentry. Great minds think alike.
Can't wait to see where you take this.
Let the games begin...
Interesting, but now I feel bad for Twilight
She gon' get her emotions played with yo 
This got to the popular box on the right, and it's not ridiculously downvoted for Flash Sentry, so I'd say this was a success for a first story!
4039545 It was on the popular stories list in the first four hours! I can't remember, but I think I shrieked.
1.
Nice save!
2. Dammit, Thunderlane!
Need more when's the next chapter !!!!??????!!!????
4041093 I dunno. Maybe a week?
This was only so fast because I was halfway done when I posted the story. I honestly wasn't even going to add this chapter until tomorrow. But I have started chapter 3.
huh, im surprised this isn't down voted to hell.
4041138 Me too.
4041128 yyyaaaayyy!!!!
Perfect. I like the idea of Flash and Thunerlane being friends. Also that was funny with Thunder zooming away. I can't wait for the next chapter.
I got one thing to say Moar
i love love love love this series SO MUCH!!!!
I wanted to see the date, when it was over Iwas like:
Yay!!
is it a princess bride reference?
Well this isn't going to end well. I like this story. I can't wait for the next chapter.
4071360 Yeah, very subtle. /)
YAY!
A New chapter!
I'll have what she's having.
Really?
Really?
REALLY??
4075005 What?
4075041 Oh,nothing. Still,that is the most cliche line ever. I used it with my girlfriend on a few dates.
This is getting hilarious. Let's see where this leads...
I mean keep