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Eternal Flame


Hey, I'm Eternal Flame. I'm Fifteen Years old, I'm Scottish (But I live in Canada) and Applejack is my favorite pony, along with Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie. I mainly read, but I write sometimes.

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Twilight and her friends soon find themselves in a dark forest after being sucked into a portal. They soon find that this is no ordinary forest- it's home to many fearsome cats. The newcomers must learn the ways of the Clans, learn to respect the warrior code and obey the will of StarClan.

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Comments ( 43 )

I should make a group for Warrior Cats...:pinkiegasp:

LIKE, will be following :pinkiehappy::moustache::duck::yay:

Read the description and immediately liked. Thank you so much for making a fic with this concept.

I FREAKING LOVE WARRIOR CATS.

Alright, just read it. Nice story, but it was a bit lacking in one or two spots. I think it could be fixed with a few changed words here and there, though, and overall this a great concept and story. I have to ask, though, do you have and editor? If not, I'd be happy to go over it, if you're interested. Checking out you profile now, to see if you have any other stories.

FAVORITA FAVORITE LIKE LIKE LIKE AAAHAHAHHAHHHHHHAHA I LOVE IT, AH LOVE ET, WAAAAARRRRRRIORRRR CAAAAAAAATSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!! OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG ITS WHAT MY PROFILE PIC IS BASED OFF IVEBEENWAITINGFORAWARIRORCATSMYLITTLEPONYCROSSOVERFORLIKEFOEVERANDNOWMYPLEADSHAVECOMETRUEANDIMSOHAAAAAAAPPPYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!! IM CRYING TEARS OF JOYOYOYOYYYYYYAH :raritycry: IM SO HAPPY RIGHT NOW, I FEEL SO EMOTIONAL!!!!!! OMGOMGOMGOMG GIVE MEH MORE, GIMMEH MORE. NOOOOOWWWWWWWEEH. (I'm totally starting a group for warrior cats :pinkiecrazy:)

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Thank you!!!!!!! I never expected to get this many likes. I'm about to post it in a warrior cats group.

I mean, only one downvote!

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Wow! This looks nice, I may check it out.. When it's not past Five in the morning:rainbowlaugh::twilightblush:

3984709 np :raritywink: (I also just started a warirors group, if you want to post it in there maybe... :twilightsheepish:) I'd like 10 more times if I could :twilightsmile:

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Thank you! What's the group called?

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I end up going to a different group that isn't made by you. Maybe if you sent a link...?

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I'll make a warrior cats group!!! :pinkiehappy:

Thanks for reading, and thanks to TempesttheDragnix for editing.

I'm noticed! Thanks! Oh, and the edits for Chapter 1 will be finished soon.

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:pinkiesmile: glad you're happy,

Took the second chapter down to add more to it, but will be back within an hour.

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Thank you! I'm glad I've received so much positive feedback!

:pinkiegasp:o...m...g... FINALLY someone makes a good pony/warriors crossover!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:yay::yay::yay::yay::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::raritystarry::raritystarry:

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:pinkiesmile: sorry I haven't been updating my stories much, I've had vacation. :pinkiehappy:

THIS IS TOO AWESOME :rainbowkiss:

Next chapter's finally published, :yay:

"Yes please! I would like to know every cat." Rainbow Dash replied

I honestly think that Pinkie would be the one to say that line, cause, y'know, she'd probably want to know everone, and.. yeah.....

Hey there! Just wanted you to know the newest chapter is great, and I'll be editing the 1st and 2nd ones today.

so very very very very very very very very very (etc etc) awesome:raritystarry::raritystarry::raritystarry::raritystarry::raritystarry::raritystarry::raritystarry::raritystarry::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

4030932 It actually said Bubblepaw, which is Pinkie, not Rainbow.

4117111 Well she may have edited it, because when I saw it, it said Rainbow Dash

4118111 oh. The whole "name-changing" concept is really confusing me.

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... What?

It's even confusing me.

Kind of fast paced. But I like were this is going.:ajsmug:

well... that was uneventful... meh, still a pretty good starter:moustache:

3986803 your profile pic scares me a bit...:moustache:

ok, but how can Derpy, Bonbon, Lyra, Big Mac, Berry Punch, Vinyl Scratch, and Octavia, are suppose to help with a closing of a portal?
they lack the knowledge to help learn how to close it, and the ones that do have magic don't have the necessary power to close it, so why bring them?:applejackconfused:
other than the need to have more characters.

ok, a bit better, though the pacing is still a little fast for my taste, and honestly I am tired of the hole "StarClan predicted it" thing.
still, I am a bit intrigued, please continue.

ok, new problem, I don't believe that the ponies, expesuly Pinkie, would attack first. And they are just going to accept all of this just like that, with out question?
sorry, I am glad you tried to make a better Warrior crossover, but it didn't work out for me.:pinkiesad2:

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It was clearly stated that they will be investigating. Sometimes the best investigators are average people (or ponies in this case) as professional investigators sometimes overthink things. Plus, some of them might be there to scare away timber wolves, though I feel that part is incorrect seeing as how both princesses are there.

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