Discord has finally realized how he can defeat Celestia and Luna. But, there is a problem. Aside from them, there is one other Alicorn who has enough power to stop him. One, who he will have to ensure can no longer be a problem.
Twilight was just writing in her journal when it happened. When He came, and He ruined it all. But now, now she has a plan. It is not the greatest of plans, and in the end, it may not even work, but when you have nothing to lose, and everything to gain, then any risk is a risk worth taking.
*Takes place in Season 4, right before the events of Discord's Blue Flu.*
*Pokemon Crossover*
*Rated teen because some people cannot handle battle scenes very well and will most likely make a fuss over it*
Also, check out my amazing proofreader! He's the guy that, without his help, this story would probably still be a thought floating around my head.
And thus, the false profit lead Twilight astray... May the helix fossil guide her. Keep goin and stay golden^^
You get a follow for intersting and obsceurity, lets see where this goes.
I like it so far, but there is one thing that annoys me. You really should put some spacing between the paragraphs. With it being a block of text, it's easier, at least for me, to lose the spot I was at whenever I did something like yawn or even blink.
I love how nobody's said this yet:
I lost the game.
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Thank you, and also, do you happen to know how to check who has fovourited the story?
3994703 Oh, you know the dome fossil will also guide her. The dome fossil will also make sure nothing hurts her(Forsehadow? Not sure if true or not
3995414 Sorry, that's my own fault on that one. I don't particularly enjoy spacing on stories, as I read majority of the time on my phone, so it just looked right to me. I may or may not change it. Depends on how many people ask me to.
4001251 We've all lost the game, but some people just don't know they're playing it yet
4004359 first button on the right, same bar where it lists the characters.
4004490 Alright, thank you very much! I've never posted a story on here, and so I'm relatively new to this.
4004359 Well, I'm here to make their lives worse, so it's all gud.
4005537 Easiest way to make their lives worse: Remind them they're playing the game:DDD
4009536 Damn it, Serrano. Stahp eet.
Is Twilight unascending because of Discord? Or because the Pokemon world has the wrong kind of magic?
4011068 Find out next time on Pokeball Z! roundstable.com/forums/images/smilies/party.png
Don't ask me, because I don't know either :/.
4011068 Actually, it's a bit of both. Discord needed a way to get rid of Twilight and her OP Alicorn powers, so he sent her to the Pokemon Universe, where she could no longer interfere. This indirectly took away her Alicorn wings, as the magic of the Pokemon Universe is different. More will be explained on this later on.
4011499 Oh, you;}
4013509 I love puns. And sleep.
I should probably get to that now. Exam tomorrow…
Well, I could tell that this was a really original idea when reading chapter one.
Might as well see how this goes.
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Thanks, I actually worked pretty hard on the basis for it. The original version I had a couple months ago was... not very original. As in, basic, basic stuff. Now, though, I've spent a long time coming up the outline for this one, which not even my editor has seen all of (Sorry Moldy, but no one can know how it ends
4111938 Or, you could show it to me.
You'd just have to pay me 300 Rupees. I'll hush up quickly after that. roundstable.com/forums/images/smilies/rariwink.png
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Oh, but that would be the easy way out. No, I plan on making some super long final chapter that everyone will either hate or love, and you'll get to be included with that everyone!
4126290 But I wanna get Rupees!
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No rupees for you until you angrily murder 1000 more pots!
4130176 Rrrgh!
Chapter Title:
Twilight's "Let's Move" Campaign
So, only humans and animals have Biological reproduction then and ponies and Pokemon have....
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.... emotional reproduction I guess?
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Why yes. I mean, I didn't want to put anything in there that would be bad enough to have someone reccomend a rating change, and you just know that would be one of Twilight's questions.
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Sounds good, but... Something's missing. I'm not too sure what, though. If nothing else, I'll probably use this. Way better than what I had thought of, anyways.
4139452 Maybe it's missing "Michelle Obama" or "First Lady Twilight Sparkle".
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learn any pokemon moves?
Alrright, I'm drawn a blank, what are you talking about here?
4224862 Sableye and Spiritomb.
They can only be super effectively hit if one used Foresight or Odor Sleuth before using a Fighting-type move.
EDIT: Pre-Gen VI. I keep forgetting that Fairy-types are a thing. ¬.¬
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Well, technically she isn't a Pokemon. But at the same time, any human that sees he will assume she is one. So really, no, she won't, but that doesn't mean she can't make her own spell based off of a move.
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Hello, please refer to: 4228366 for further information. Thank you for your time, and please, enjoy your stay at Cloudy Serrano's first, and most likely happiest, fanfic.
One thing that you have done that not very many people can do successfully - myself not among them - is that you set up the first chapter to where you have given us the basic plot of the story, in this case: Twilight has to become the Pokemon Champion and successfully defend it at least once. In doing so, you gave us the opportunity to leave, as we already know what is going in end up happening, or we can stay and see how it all plays out, plot twists included.
Myself? I'm going to keep on reading. As a long-time fan of Pokemon - from 1st to 5th gen as I don't have a 3DS and there isn't a 3DS emulator currently available - I'm going to stick with this one for as long as I deem it to be a reasonable read.
Keep it up!
Is there a reason why some of the formatting is odd? It seems like the return key was hit in a few odd places.
6071193 My bad on that, I've been meaning to fix all of the formatting throughout the entirety of the story. I'll be getting to it as soon as I can.
*Edit* Was looking over it right now, and I realized that for some reason, the errors are being caused by some weird double space glitch. Weird because it wasn't and still isn't on the Docs page, and I can't search for the double space with Ctr+F. I'll fix it, although the work is extremely tedious.
...what's with the bit at the end just before the author's note? Did you just forget to erase it after you finished writing the chapter or something?