Applejack finds herself in a serious argument that quickly escalates. As a result, she commits a heinous deed which leads to her beginning to hear voices in her head. When things start to get out of control, the encroaching insanity and guilt causes her to do the one thing you never thought she would ever do.
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Fairly abrupt escalation into murder.. But the rest of the chapter was good.
I totally called that betrayal in the courtroom
What!?
I would like to see a sequel where a blind with rage Rainbow Dash tries to hunt down A.J.
love it
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Cheers
~iraqlobstah
umm... what?
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There are still more chapters of this story to be uploaded yet. I'm not giving anything away though
Why have so many people disliked my fan-fic? I put so much effort into it...
Everypony, please; if you're going to take the time to click the dislike button, why can't you take 30 seconds to explain WHY you disliked it. Just give me reasons. It'll help improve the fan-fics I plan to write in the future.
Thanks.
377554 Sweet.
I like the story but the Thumbs up/Thumbs down thing is very ridiculous. Maybe some people got frightened over the story, I don't know the actual reason why but yeah, that thumbs down rating was just stupid. It's rated Teen for a reason people! But as far as the story goes, please don't let the stupid thumbs down rating stop you, it's a good story keep it up.
When I saw what Applejack did I was all
I would LOVE to read a sequel to this.....
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I love getting feedback, whether it's positive feedback or constructive criticism. Second of all, you're right. I mean, if they're frightened by stories like this, they should look at the rating. I rated this fan-fic 'teen' because of it's content.
First of all, thank you very much
If they're disturbed by this though, they should read my story "Travelling Through Maceponia Leaves Nopony The Same". You can read it yourself if you want, but bear in mind that when I wrote it I was basically just trying to make it as disturbing and horrifying as possible, so just keep that in mind. And the comments on that fan-fic certainly reflect that.
But with this story I tried to add some drama and suspense to make you guys not want to turn away, and always be eager to know what Applejacks encroaching insanity will drive her to do next. I won't give anything away though, of course.
I see what you did thar.....
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Lol, what did I do 'thar'? Haha.
I imagined the truth serum to look like quicksilver/mercury..
AWESOME =D
Wait. Who's firefly and Posey?
393113 He switched the G4 ponies with their counterparts from earlier generations. Posy is Fluttershy, Firefly is Rainbow Dash and well Applejack is still Applejack.
393113 theres a button on the bottem of the page that says toggle G1 mode if you press that it goes back to normal
This was a good chapter. I hope to Celestia that Applejack FUCKING DIES! After what Applejack did to my favorite pony in this chapter, I HOPE THAT FUCKING SON OF A BITCH DIES! Your writing was just terrific and look forward to the next chapter!
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I'm glad you liked it!
Chapter 3 is in production at the moment and I should have it uploaded within a week.
NOOOO not Flutters!
Also RD is out for....REVENGE!!!!
Boom. Vengeance + Thunderstorm scene.
I hope you guys liked this chapter. By the way, I'm sorry it took so long for me to get it up
I managed to find a rom for a video game that I hadn't played since I was a little kid (Legend of Zelda: Ocarina of Time, to be exact), and I was so excited to find it that I just forgot about my fan-fic for a few days while I played it 
Anyway, sorry about that. Chapter 4 will be coming up soon so stay tuned
I hope Fluttershy pulls through!
Also GO SCOOTS!!!! 
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I'm guessing you're confused by my fan-fic? Did you at least read all of it?
What a
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I did read and that ending came out of nowhere(talk about a
) Also I believed you used hands where you meant to type hooves, speaking of which how can they use firearms with hooves. That aside this was an interesting story.
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Yeah, that's what I intended; a dramatic
at the end 
it took me about two hours to write that twist at the end lol.....
I'm aware that there are some mistakes in this fan-fic. But besides that, I'm glad you found it interesting. I hope the ending wasn't too confusing though
Very interesting. Very interesting indeed...
, then I was like 
, then I was like "Very interesting. Very interesting indeed..."
I liked it so far.
First I was like
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which I suppose is why it has much more dislikes than likes. But I'm very grateful that you continued reading, and I'm happy you liked it 
I admit that at the start, it's quite a boring fan-fic
617834 I want Applejack dead I want Rainbow Dash ok and not dead but no just had to kill dinn't you
but good story
That
though!
Spikes out of 5
I rate
Poor AJ, None of this was her fault.