Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, Applejack, and Rarity are on their way to the summer estate of the royals for their birthday celebration. The royals have arranged for them to travel in a new type of carrage powered by magic, not wings. On the way, one of the pilots dies on duty, sending the carrage crashing into an island in the middle of nowhere. The five (the other pilot included) must now not only survive the wrath of the island, but eachother.
Narrorated by Death, and will include elements found in the tv series, 'Lost', and the book, 'Lord of the Flies'
Gore:the initial crash. Injuries described of each pony.
Special thanks to Niaeruzu
Chapters (4)
Damn cliff hangers
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Is that a good thing?
Can't wait for next chapter! Keep up the good work!
Leave comments saying what you liked, and what could be improved on/ added.
oh god applejack is blind, please dont do this man D: well....its your story but still flutter and rainbow are mad and oh god
oh god applejack is blind, please dont do this man D: well....its your story but still flutter and rainbow are mad and oh god
It gets worse...
847738 twilight looses her horn?!
848685 she's not even there dimwit!
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yet... O_O
Interesting point of view. I like it because it's ORIGIONAL.
Also I'm guessing this is the Ponys' version of the human Death? Amirite?
Continue please
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I am extremly busy today, tomorrow. Tuesday I will be on a plane most of the day, so I will work on it then.
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close, the "Death" talked of Earth and Equestria, humans and ponies. so i would stand to believe there is one Death that takes the form of whatever species he is taking the souls of.
1) maybe it's only temporary blindness.
2) gets worse... oh my god! ZOMBIE PONIES. or cannibals
3) alternet gets worse... HUMANS!
4) have a like.
5) Bucking cliffhangers.
I will begin working on STRANDED again soon :D
Interesting, well, lets hope Fluttershy isn't dead. That would be horrible, and quite quick as well... unless that water was contaminated.
919541 death by malaria?!
Creatures of some sort? Like necrotic monsters.
I ain't gonna give 'way no secrets!
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I was thinking Gardia or some thing along those lines. But since it is a water source, that would mean that there is the possibility of Malaria infected mosquitoes hanging around. But those diseases take a while to kill.
haha those are all good ideas. I don't really have an outline for this story, so your ideas mayyy be n it!
923323 true true
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Cool, but those are only Earth diseases, there could be others in Equestria, like they have the Poison Joke-weed they could have something similar but as a microorganism.
'As I followed the two, a familiar smell began to appear in the air. It was too faint for the other to smell, but as it is directly related to my career, I was keen to smelling it. The smell, was of death.' OMGAWD FLUTTERS! Hopefully she isn't dead from the water...
HAHA don't worry, the next update will be in a few days
955542 Now is this your time or Earth time?
You said a few days two weeks ago...
"Only a few yards away WAR Rarity." fix that whenever you can
Ok I know you said at the beginning only one would make it back... But please just let them all make it back!
I'll pay their ransom here have a thousand Derpys
I have Twilights too 
,just please have mercy!!!!
Sorry about that mental breakdown as you can see I like the mane six.
Anywho great story its well written, thought out, and executed... I mean done, no execution, no none will be had.....
Random fact of the day: The mane six are invincible!!! Ha! I beat you at your own game, see now its a fact! Your story can't hurt them now!
Applejack can also produce food with thought... Rainbow Dash can use her mind to call rescue crews, and Fluttershy can cry clean water! Ha I solved all of the problems they're saved!!!
I like it
