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Dragonborne Fox


It's one thing to create/throw already-established characters in a story of some kind. It's another thing to develop those characters, regardless of the situation they're in.

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Remilia Scarlet, a vampiress over five hundred years old, wakes up one dandy dusk to find out she isn't in Gensokyo. Even worse, she's become equine.

Needless to say, she's rather angry about it.

Armed with her Gungnir, her ability to control fate on a whim, and her own wits, she decides to conquer Equestria.

Except there's a problem: namely, a shrine maiden who somehow got into Equestria as well. Where in Makai is Yukari when you need her?

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Crossover with Touhou, particularly Embodiment of the Scarlet Devil. Told from Remilia's perspective. A collab with this pony. Chapters are kept relatively short, but not short enough to render this 15 chapters in one go.

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 63 )

Divine helped write it? Well then I guess I don't have a choice.

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We're a bit disorderly so for the most part I urged it along whenever Dragonborne stopped.:twilightsheepish:
Thank you for the faith though.:rainbowkiss:
EDIT: Now I'm doing something more.:twilightsheepish:

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yes

Hum... chapters are too short so far IMO... if it wasn't for the fact that you updated really quickly!

It had been so long since I last had a reflection

Why can't she see her own reflection?

Also vampire hunters? Which means: Equestria has vampires! :rainbowkiss:

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Vampires generally do not appear in reflective surfaces at all. :rainbowwild:

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The "conveniently placed" mirror that was most likely set there for that express purpose?:twilightsmile:

This is really interesting! Love it! Now just keep on updating please!

4160820 Me and Divine are doing our best to work on it! Chill! :twilightsmile:

Looks like Remi got some of dem xenophobia.
This is good, as it's not going to one of those OP character goes to MLP: everyone respects/fears her, omg he/she invincible lez make a cult.

So far, I'd give this fic a solid :moustache:/5

4162630 I believe the term you are looking for is Mary Sue. And I completely agree, I'm tired of reading stories where the protagonist is all-powerful and every situation ends in his or her favor.

Could the night, standing by my side, give me strength in what I believed what would’ve been my darkest hour?

You mean... BRIGHTEST hour?! islandmix.com/backchat/attachments/f6/21072d1114035490-de-post-fiyah-dont-want-yuh-read-bwahaha.jpg

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This is Remilia Scarlet we're talking about though.:rainbowwild:
Once she remembers that she's magically, physically and mentally superior to the ponies she'll be rather dangerous.

oh no pegazus alert

I hope more Gensokyo-ians shows up. Also where is this story going? I mean is Remillia going to get captured, then brought to the princesses, or maybe she'll venture into Ponytown...
NEVERMIND! DONT TELL ME! I DONT WANT TO BE Le SPOILED!

Um.

Yo, fox dude.

Y'all right?

4300645 We're alright, just on tight schedules. School is draining me, but I'm pushing through (not so sure about Divine, though...)

4301256 In that case, take your time.

Comment posted by Dragonborne Fox deleted Apr 28th, 2014

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I had no life to speak of, so when I suddenly had one it became problematic:raritydespair:
I'll write some now.:twilightsheepish:

Comment posted by Dragonborne Fox deleted May 11th, 2014

Another so soon?!

:pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::yay:

Also, wtf! She's getting owned! Pummeled! I cry o' scandal!

I wonder what's Reimu role in the story... sidekick perhaps? Or maybe mysterious helper? Who knows, they might be enemies later, her obviously wanting to keep the killing at a minimal, while Remi, well... revenge and stuff.

4377910 All will be revealed in due time, my friend. All will be revealed in due time. :rainbowwild:

2hu~ :) I was hoping there would be more pony/touhou crossovers and my wish has come true!

4963430 I wonder how Flandre is doing, though? She'd... utterly destroy the ponies, though. So perhaps it's for the best she stays in Gensokoyo. :pinkiesad2: (Also, this fanfic is going really well! <3)

Read the story so far.
... why I have the feeling that the Interrogator Stallions WILL receive a visit from the Maid, the Gatekeeper and the Librarian (and it will be a VIOLENT visit) when the faithful servants of the Scarlet Devil WILL know what they have done to their Master?
Vote: 10+++

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