One day you were with a friend, talking about MLP and how amazing it is. But then you start talking about how most of the stuff, not just Pinkie Pie, but most of the stuff in the place makes no sense worth a damn. Then you keep questioning things until you find yourself forced through some magic portal to see a bunch of angry ponies and princesses(and a very happy Discord) and have a feeling that your going to have to explain a lot of things...but mainly question and down right say that some things make no sense.
This is my first one shot, so any comments will be accepted. This is based on my conversations with family and friends about most things in FIM that makes no sense worth the life of me. So...if you don't want to see everypony rage at someone telling them 'this doesn't make any sense' then don't read this. But this is not a troll fic, I just needed to do this and frankly, why would I do something silly like that?
And if anyone can notice the reference to a certain Youtuber in the 'Authors Notes' I will give you a cookie
So your a king now are you?
4432781 It's just a silly title that I gave my original OC
nothing too special...just a little name. It's not like people have done worse right
4432798 Whatever you say and I'm still waiting for your reply
4432809 Sorry
4432819 np
@Xinrick
I don't know how but when I began reading this sentence the first pony to pop into my head was Rainbow Dash speaking... i realized i was right after i finished it. Hmm...
That being said.. is this by any chance Pinkie Pie speaking? -
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Stop right there!!! Have a mustache for my LOLS!!!
*gives
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4432912 I am happy that you like the story
I still find it a bit poor but if I can make a guy laugh with a few words and plots(
) than I'm happy
Oh and the Pinkie part...I don't know in all honesty I just wanted to do silly things :P. But Pinkie sounds about right when her 'Interrogation mode' is activated
Oh I know who your were referencing in the authors note, sir Lord Knight Markiplier III Esquire (but yeah markiplier) also this story sounds entertaining, I'll have to give it a read soon
4433011 Ok then, and thank you for guessing the famous Youtuber that I was referencing.
Here's your cookie. *Hands a cookie to you*
I don't understand how the hierarchy of species works. Are the talking dairy cows slaves to ponies? Do they eat them? In the Twilight Time episode, Twilight eats hay burgers. Even if they only needed cows for their milk, why bother corralling them and keeping them penned if they function on the same mental level as ponies? That seems like unopposed subjugation to me. Also, who decides which animals achieve sentience? Half the the animals in the MLP universe are pets and cannot speak at all. Why is there such a large schism there? Animals keeping animals as pets just seems weird.
...Then again, it's a show for little girls.
4433152 that is true....why do I have a feeling that people will want me to make more out of this?
4433165 Not to mention the types of technology they have in various places is wildly inconsistent with the rest of the show. (Hazmat suits, flashlights, electrical machinery, a hydro-electric dam, a steampunk apple extruder.) My Little Anachronism: Chronology is Irrelevant.
4433027 Awesome job dude.
4433240 Yeah pretty much...it doesn't make any sense.
4433243 Thank you thank you
"Make sense, oh, but what fun is there in making sense?"
-Discord
4435150 The main character in it even said that for laughs
4433240 The story that I'm writing was actually inspired partially by those technological inconsistencies. Basically those random pieces tech are just what survived the Apocalypse.
5022095 Yeah like ovens, DJ equipment and stuff like that.
5022111 Exactly! although it was the DJ equipment that started it
5022123 Yeah pretty much...I don't know what more tech they'll somehow wrangle there way to have for some weird reason
5022128>>5022123 Somewhere, somepony will find a laptop that magically has power. The tab open on the browser will be Cookie Clicker, and that pony will die from cookie clicking so hard.
The end. c:
5022191 Pretty much
5022201 The only reason I haven't gone back to Cookie Clicker is that I closed it and I keep getting lost in TV Tropes.
5022208 alright then
5022215 >.>
5022256 <.<
5022259 v.v
5022287 ^.^
5022291 There, I made you happy!
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Have you ever considered submitting this story to Equestria Daily? You can find out how to do so here.
5463305 This is the first time I've actually heard someone say 'submit this to a very big MLP site'...now I'm both flattered, happy and scared at the same time.
but it's more than villians it's about how most of the things in MLP make no sense, sure the villians and bullies are a thing but still.
Edit: I looked at the 'Guidlines' and it looks like it would fail in all honesty...which sucks...
THIS STORY IS:
i like to see more
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6394175 Thank you, for the fav, the video and the watch my friend.
i like this
6404645 thank you
This needs a sequel that turns into a full out story somehow.
6967573 About which part? The part where my character starts getting magic from appearing in Equestria too much and starts dating a griffin? Or me just being all powerful with words and still date a griffin?
6967685 The second one honestly, because the magic shtick is overdone and the second one just overall sounds interesting.
6967748 Ah, that makes sense and also glad my character can still date a griffin
6968870 Girffons are sexy and awesome.
6968900 Yes and yes
I'm so surprised no one has pointed out how bad my newest chapter is.
Ah well the randomness and the humor make up for it to somehow I find it funny to see the human shipped with Gilda
7315984 I have a feeling you mean the grammer is shitty but the randomness and humor makes up for it and the shipping between the two is thankfully funny.
7316205
Youre right and it would be awesome to see a story that would go into the named pairing deeper
7316482 Alright then, that sounds like a good idea I might pick it up when I decide to start writing for this stuff again.