Tomorrow's the end of the world, and what do I do? Play some Starcraft cause I've got nothing better to do. Little did I know that someone had an idea to give me a new life.
"What are you doing Tanya?"
Writing in my journal Zagara, nothing special. So yeah...with a new friend we both happened to not only be sent to a new world but also with...certain new things.
So watch as I go from avid Starcraft 2 player to an actual leader as I go around and save the universe with help.
Hmm, I won't mind seeing more
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Thank you, I'll try to do my best and get it to actually be good
Lots of SC crossovers lately. and im not complaining one bit
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Been playing Starcraft 2 lately. But glad you like it...I hope
Interesting so far. It wouldn't hurt to try expanding on the scenes in the future after you've got the core of the story finished/ready
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How so if I may ask? Cause I know I need to add more to the scene's cause...well I'm just not good at being a solo author, but besides that what do you mean?
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A touch more description of areas and events, maybe flesh out how the characters look in some scenes; especially those from non-MLP sources. Just a few suggestions from someone who is admittedly not a writer or editor
This is a good story so far. What do you think about using other people's OCs in your stories? If you are interested, you could use my Shadow Hive Kingdom. The Shadow Hive Kingdom is a changeling nation that is friendly to all non-changeling races and even have some of them living as citizens. Also if you do decide to use my hive, they are knowable about things not from the MLP universe because they are part of group called Multiuniverse Peace Force. (MPF) Send me a MP about what you think.
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Yeah, makes sense...
whan can you upload the next story part
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Not fully sure sadly but I will try to get to work on it
Why is this on hiatus after only three chapters?
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Well, I just posted the third chapter, and it is/was on Hiatus because me and BioQuillFiction are going through...all the stories we both have and going through them all so it takes a bit
Is this also a The Saga of Tanya the Evil crossover?
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No, the woman is just named Tanya
2 updates in a year? i'll put it in my tracking folder, outta my dead fic folder, hoping for more!
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Sorry for it taking a while, me and Bio finally got into a groove and schedule for a whole little stories
i cant wait to see more soon
Ok, im pissed that the zerg got skull fucked like that... not cool
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I know, but it was part of the story to prove several thing's to both sides, that Genetech's technology is really big, and that both the Protoss and Zerg are not to be messed with even with powerful gear
Ok I wanna make that ship sail full throttle, I love the banter and slight teasing
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Oh? What shipping? Since there's already one ship being set sail
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The one that sails between the 'Laviathen' and 'Spear of Adun'... wonder what naturally conceived 'lings look like.... hmmm
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Just gonna have to wait and see what wonderful natural born hybrids are going to appear
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Yep, still sour about the zerg getting curb stomped... all zerg is best zerg!
For the Swarm!
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They weren't necessarily curb stomped, they did take down several powerful golems
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Sure sure they took out a few golem but the pones literally 'deux machina'ed the zerg and protoss with their... magitech... ima chose to gripe!
Have an idea when you think you'll have the next chapter out?
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Me and Bio have a list of all the stories we work on, so it'll be a while
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Oh really, ima have to check them out, ill assume yall don't have a set schedule when you post an update for each story so ill go peruse the listings
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We have a schedule of what stories we write, not when it comes out. When it comes out, it comes out and that's the best we can promise
WOO!!
just found and read all of the chapters so far..
IT IS AMAZING
this is ONE OF THE BEST story's i have EVER seen...thank you for giving us this story...also...
what is the eta on the next chapter please??
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Well, thanks for the positivity, and all I can give is 'when it's done', because me and Bio have a lot of stories to write
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ok..i can wait...hope it don't get canceled cause you guys are running yourselves to hard tho...
Fukin tina!
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Yeh
WOOOOO!!!!
new chapter!!!
i can not WAIT for the next chapter...cause it feels like its going to get awesome...or romantic..cause the dubble date sounds like its going to be interesting...more entertaining in some ways if certain nobles decide to try and do something during it...buut that would...prooobably ruin the whole romantic date thingy....IF that happens
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Thank you, and the date will try and be romantic, and there will be some more fights
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YES!!~
Like literally or a metaphorical way?
All the 'Zegara' must be changed for 'Zagara'.
Artanis
Also 'Zegara' must be exchanged for 'Zagara'
*Laughting Hyena impression*
Protoss can change color of the skin to indicate emotions (Sc1 facts).
Great chapter overall, like the character dynamics.
Is the at the chapter end party of creature conquerors or defender? Enemy or allies? Maybe neutral?
Isha must be edited with Izsha.
mana
Miss
this
Exchange 'Zegara' with 'Zagara'.
Sergeant
This Genetech seem to be a Mobius foundation reference / copy.
Helpfulness in the first game, a enemy in the next...
Karax and Zagara have access to campaign and co-op benefits?
I guess they could ask for Talandars help? His A.I. nature and that of his army would be perfect to stand guard in expected hot zones to buy civilians time until the Commanders arrive?
Maschines and Zerg unit losses are effectively without consequences. The Spear of Aduns crew is still limited even space to house legions of Protoss...
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Don't worry, Genetech is going to be remain good guys.
They would have both cause, technically, this would be 'reality' in this story so they would have both.
I completely forgot that Talandar might have been on the Spear of Adun but I assumed not due to him being his own 'Commander' and the like.
Yeah, tis a bit of a bitch but they have help
Gene Tech are the Terran place holder
Nice dick joke
Izsha
I love your world or rather universe building. Simply genius.
Funny... In a way is everycreature on Equis a villain unknowing, they are the bad guys needing to be reformed
Reminds me of the saying:
Everyone is the hero of his story.
Hot damn... Now the MC duo is Amons side while the 'True'-'Changelings' are the players side on Co-Op in a way.
Reminds me of 'Halo' where Cortana want to bring peace by ending all wars a keep everyone neutral by becoming the over all police force of all.
That is why Protoss should rebuild the lost 3 Archships. The Technology needs to be spread so it don't get destroyed in a battle.
How many Protoss died trough the Spear of Adun getting partially destroyed? It is a mobil city of sorts...
He can not perform it without knowing the blueprints or layout...
The perfect race build by great planning.
Me without the explosion around me:
Unexpected but very welcome.
Mindblowing lore and humor. I absolutely love it.
This chapter alone earned you a like and a favorit.
You introduced a lot of layers. Hard to have a overview at all.
I guess we have:
- 'Protoss and Zerg' as main controlled forces for the players to use.
- 'The players' to control the armies and effect their surroundings.
- The game/universe 'designers' (gods to shape things and events)
- The overall two sides of 'creation' and 'Void' fighting for their dominance and selecting Herolds/Champions for their goals.
- 'The Author'? Having fun keeping things unpredictable