As the Moon's eclipse changed the foundation of the animals' behavior that live in the Everfree Forest, its new change has kept the citizens of Canterlot wondering what will happen next. With the reddish-orange and the dark appearance of the moon in the sky, not only will it keep Equestria on a high alert, but it will also bring something to Equestria that has never been seen before.
Inspiration comes from the moon turning red during its eclipse, and Infamous: Second Son.
Credit goes to Hasbro for MLP, Sony Computer Entertainment, and Sucker Punch Productions for Infamous: Second Son.
Chapters (6)
i feel like you could have portrayed twilight and Delsin a little better during their meeting i mean Delsin was just turned into a pony and twilight now has some random pony she does not know appear in front of her in her own home i feel like those two would have more severe reactions than what they actually did have but past that is was not bad i will keep an eye on this one and see where it goes
4251951 Maybe he should react like how he was when he first got his powers. And twilight as if he was some sort of burglar.
Thank you guys for your input, if you have any criticism to make my story better don't hesitate!
I wanna see Delsin blow some stuff up! Also they have concrete but only in major cities
4255060 There will be time for that, can't rush things just yet. Also, I fixed the concrete error that I made.
interesting, am also interesting on how will he use his other powers or get smoke, also interesting in seeing him performed the orbital drop, pony style
great story 
4255087 Thank you!
There will be time for that, Delsin needs to find the sources for his powers and a creature to fight.
4255103 also quick question, will he be able to 'absorb' the magic from Twilight or maybe the Princess?
4255189 Good question. The answer is no, because Delsin will only absorb powers from the sources that give him said powers, the sources that give him the powers that are present in Equestria. This story takes place after the good ending of the game, meaning he will not absorb powers from the people that he met or he will meet soon.
4255201 oh ok, thanks for the answer
4255330 No problem, stay tuned for more that the story has to offer!
Yay! Just finishing 2nd Son myself, this is a realy awesome topic! Combined with good writing, deserves a like and fav.
4255889 Thank you so much!
I'll be sure to keep the story very well written to your liking.
Alright, will a crashed containment bus fall out of the moon with Fetch, Eugine, Hank, and Augustine in it? If so, will Twilight be Delson's brother throughout all of this? If so, does that mean Twilight will die? These are all predictions, and I don't think it will happen... But you mentioned aj and Rarity, so does that mean Twi is Betty and one of them is his brother? I say his brother because I forgot Delson's Brother's name. Was it Robby? I would like to know.
4255953 Delsin's brother's name is Reggie. I'll bring you up to speed, Delsin is in Equestria with Twilight so far. As the story progresses, Delsin will start to learn more about his purpose in Equestria and what the future holds for him. As for Augustine, this takes place after Delsin exposed Augustine's crimes, Fetch and Eugene are mentioned in the prologue, but only Fetch is with Delsin at the time. Eugene is mentioned, but not seen yet.
AJ and Rarity will meet Delsin after he gets acquainted with their universe, for now one step at a time.
Sorry, I may have as- wait, did you follow me?
4256026 Eeyup.
hmmmm not bad
4257951 Uh, thanks!
the data is too precised. To exact, Twilight should ask questions the machine shouldn't be too exact in its finding especially it went hay wire. hhehe.. hay.. anywho. the data should have said 'unknown origins, strange manipulation powers ranging from smoke to concrete, non magic energy abilities detected of unknown make and origins [the neon power] ' That will make it more believable. Twilight will ask of these unknown data of Delsin later. And her first question "How did you manage to manipulate smoke without magic?"
That's my opinion on the matter. not bad concept though.. do ignore me if i offend you
4262670 You didn't offend me, I'll be sure to have Twilight ask more questions about Delsin.
Huh. Wouldn't the orbital drop be more... Destructive?
4263040 Yes, but it was still destructive.
4263075 It was destructive, but I mean destroy nearby buildings destructive.
4263075 and besides, wouldn't ponies find his powers weird? This isn't the human world where he settled things straight.
4263082 Well, Delsin didn't want to hurt any innocent ponies nearby.
4263088 They aren't really familiar with his powers yet, but they will start to learn about them once they get to know him better.
am impress, also his Delsin good or bad? and final nice take on the orbital drop, can't wait to see more
4263300 Thank you! Delsin is good.
4263320 alright, hope to see more
4263427 You will!
4263433
4263509
More will be shown!
4263553 awesome
4263645 Awesome, indeed.
Wait...timber wolves can breath fire? Is that cannon or did you make that up?
4263997 I didn't make it up.
very interesting, great chapter
4265490 Really? Thanks again!
4265498 hey just being honest here, the story is really good in my book
4265542 I wouldn't say that it's my best work, but thank you though!
4265565 your welcome and again it's awesome on my book
4265580 Good to know!
It is awesome to see such an interesting idea written so well!
4267063 Thank you!
You know that you rushed the final part of this chapter too much, RIGHT?!
4269162 I didn't really notice, but thanks for telling me.
For some reason, I don't like it…
4269208 Well, there was nothing else to add to it. But, you will love the next chapter though.
4269217 I hope so… :)