Music to her Ears

by xStellar_Bubbles

Chapter 2: The Party

Vinyl fiddled more with her new DJ Booth. She pushed buttons and flipped switches on the mixer, and turned away at the turntables. Vinyl had a big happy smile that just kept on beaming and beaming when she's composing the music right in her very red eyes. Disco Mix also had a joyful grin.

"Yeah! You're doing it!"

"I'm doing it daddy!!!!"

"Okay Vinyl, I'm going to finish doing the dishes before your mother gets mad at me. Have fun with your booth!"

"Alright daddy thank you!"

"Oh! Vinyl! I believe you should be getting ready for school!"

Oh right! School! Vinyl thought. And Sunny Dreams' birthday is today!

" And there should also be some DJ sunglasses somewh-"

"DISCO!"

"Oh, um, coming Jazzy!"

Vinyl smiled a bit at how her father was kind of scared of her mom. Anyways, Vinyl searched everywhere for the glasses that Disco described for her. She found them behind the same cloth that covered the DJ Booth. Vinyl tried the glasses on. They had purple contacts and black outlines. The glasses were pretty big, for a filly like Vinyl's age. But, she still liked them.

Now, what was I doing? Oh right! Getting ready for school!

Vinyl then polished the glasses and every part of the DJ Booth. She then put it her instruments into her saddlebag, just for Vinyl's keepsake.

Later at Vinyl's school, she entered the classroom of Star Blossom, a orange-yellow earth pony mare who is very similar to Cheerilee, she liked to make fillies and colts happy. Vinyl hung her saddlebag on the back of her chair. Star Blossom walked up to the front of the class.

"Okay, everypony! Today is actually a very special day! Do you ponies want to know why? It's because it's Sunny Dreams' birthday!"

The whole class cheered as little Sunny Dreams simply blushed and smiled.

"There's also going to be a small birthday party after this school day ends. Sunny Dreams' mother was just so kind enough to bake us cupcakes, all for the whole class!"

The whole class cheered yet again.

The beginning of the party has just started. Every colt and filly there was enjoying a great time as they ate the cupcakes that Sunny handed out.

"Class! I also think that there should be music too for this party! Hold on a second, class! Nopony get in trouble!"

It didn't take long for Star Blossom to find a phonograph. She plopped a disc right on its respective place. Everypony in the room went wild. They were all dancing. But suddenly, one little filly bumped into another one, who was too close to the phonograph, causing it to fall and smash in pieces. A few children screamed, but all of them were shocked. Even the teacher was shocked. A colt screamed out,

"Great! Now how are we going to listen to music?"

Vinyl stood up, grabbed the DJ Booth along with the sunglasses and called out to her teacher.

"Ms. Blossom! I think that I can fix this problem!"

"You can Vinyl? Well, give me your best shot, then."

Vinyl went to a corner of the classroom and got out her DJ Booth and put on her glasses. A lot of children "oooohhhh'd" and "aaahhh'd" at the sight of the instrument. Vinyl then plugged in the machine and put on her glasses. She turned the turntables and flipped switches and pushed buttons on her mixer. She was making music. The crowd went wild, and on her flank was an eighth note cutie mark.

THE END

Author's Note:

Hey guys! Thanks for reading my first fanfic! I know that it might be a little bit off, so don't be afraid to give me some constructive criticism!

Comments

[DarknutLord]

Nice job. There were a few spelling errors, and the transition of events seemed to be a bit off. I'm not sure how a DJ table could be carried in a filly's saddlebags or backpack, though.
I noticed that this story is listed as unfinished, and if it really is, I am intrigued as to see where it will lead. Regardless, keep on writing; it's sure to get better with practice.

[xStellar_Bubbles]

Lol, sorry. This fanfic is actually complete. Also, thank you. I'm glad that you enjoyed reading. :)

[xStellar_Bubbles]

4365466 Also, I actually edited the story a bit. It should be fine now...I think.

[Azusa]

While this is your first story, it shows promise. At this point I would suggest reading through Ezn's guide. It should give you some suggestions on where to go.

For now, I look forward to seeing what you have next.

[Dead Account 20]

I was going to reply to your comment on my page, but I feel this is the more appropriate place to leave the comment. You're welcome for the favorite, you deserved it. The story idea was adorable and I'm a sucker for filly Vinyl, so that's something. Now, in response to the other comment, I've seen turntables that fit into small bags for easy transporting, but I think it would be a bit too heavy for a filly. Although it takes more than just playing with the equilizers and jog wheels to mix music, that isn't really something to be nit-picky about, more just a personal observation. Now, the story was a bit short in my opinion, but it has potential. Think about beefing up your paragraphs with details to make the story more enjoyable. When I set up a scene, I make a check list to cover all give basic senses to better describe what's going on. You mentioned the attic was dusty and smelled that way too. Maybe the floorboards creak as she scrambles up the steps. Things like that. But overall, it was really good. I really enjoyed it and hope to see more like this from you. :]

[xStellar_Bubbles]

4729447 Yay, thank you for liking my story! Also, I agree with a little bit of what you said. After all, this was my first story

[Rainbow FlutterDash]

Aww, cute story. Liked!

(Didn't fav... I've only ever six stories out of the roughly one hundred I've read so... sorry. )

[xStellar_Bubbles]

5322939 Thanks! Now that I think about it, this isn't too shabby for my first story.

[xStellar_Bubbles]

5322939 Oh hey, and thanks for those two bookshelf additions as well.

[Rainbow FlutterDash]

5322947
Hey, I just created a new favourites bookshelf, and changed my original favourites bookshelf into "Best of the Best Favourites."
That way I can fav all the stories that weren't quite breathtaking enough to be in my original favourites. Including this one!

[FelineFluff]

Wow this was amazing for your first Fic!!!

[xStellar_Bubbles]

5707154 Really? It's that amazing?

[FelineFluff]

5707293 Eeyup

[xStellar_Bubbles]

5707299 Hehe, why, thank you! But wait, why was it amazing?

[FelineFluff]

5707346 Because it was a brilliant representation of how one of my favorite background ponies got her cutie mark