A derp trying to make sense of reality.
Vinyl Scratch has always loved music, ever since she was a filly. Her dad, Disco Mix, and her mom, Jazzy Tune, would always practice pop music that they compose, just for Vinyl. Vinyl dreamed that some day....
"I want to be as cool and talented as my mommy and daddy."
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Nice job. There were a few spelling errors, and the transition of events seemed to be a bit off. I'm not sure how a DJ table could be carried in a filly's saddlebags or backpack, though.
I noticed that this story is listed as unfinished, and if it really is, I am intrigued as to see where it will lead. Regardless, keep on writing; it's sure to get better with practice.
Lol, sorry. This fanfic is actually complete. Also, thank you. I'm glad that you enjoyed reading. :)
4365466 Also, I actually edited the story a bit. It should be fine now...I think.
While this is your first story, it shows promise. At this point I would suggest reading through Ezn's guide. It should give you some suggestions on where to go.
For now, I look forward to seeing what you have next.
Wow this story is amazing! i hope you consider writing about other things since this is one is complete :) The world needs more writers like you!
I was going to reply to your comment on my page, but I feel this is the more appropriate place to leave the comment. You're welcome for the favorite, you deserved it. The story idea was adorable and I'm a sucker for filly Vinyl, so that's something. Now, in response to the other comment, I've seen turntables that fit into small bags for easy transporting, but I think it would be a bit too heavy for a filly. Although it takes more than just playing with the equilizers and jog wheels to mix music, that isn't really something to be nit-picky about, more just a personal observation. Now, the story was a bit short in my opinion, but it has potential. Think about beefing up your paragraphs with details to make the story more enjoyable. When I set up a scene, I make a check list to cover all give basic senses to better describe what's going on. You mentioned the attic was dusty and smelled that way too. Maybe the floorboards creak as she scrambles up the steps. Things like that. But overall, it was really good. I really enjoyed it and hope to see more like this from you. :]
4729447 Yay, thank you for liking my story!
Also, I agree with a little bit of what you said. After all, this was my first story 
Aww, cute story. Liked!
(Didn't fav... I've only ever six stories out of the roughly one hundred I've read so... sorry.
)
5322939 Thanks!
Now that I think about it, this isn't too shabby for my first story. 
5322939 Oh hey, and thanks for those two bookshelf additions as well.
5322947
Hey, I just created a new favourites bookshelf, and changed my original favourites bookshelf into "Best of the Best Favourites."
That way I can fav all the stories that weren't quite breathtaking enough to be in my original favourites. Including this one!
Wow this was amazing for your first Fic!!!
5707154 Really? It's that amazing?
5707293 Eeyup
5707299 Hehe, why, thank you!
But wait, why was it amazing?
5707346 Because it was a brilliant representation of how one of my favorite background ponies got her cutie mark