DANGER!!! DANGER!!! DANGER!!! This fic can and will cause your hearts to die of cuteness, unless this is your sort of thing that is. Expect to see, Diapers, Cuteness. Humans. Babies, and other things to come.
In the small town of Harmony, resides a very talented little girl named Twilight Sparkle. She had just been transferred from her old kindergarten in Starswirl Village to this new one, called "Ponyville Kindergarten"
Knowing she would have to achieve and learn much before making it to Canterlot High in the future, Twilight is looking forward to a new school year with some cute little classmates.
What she doesn't know, is how to play, which could be a little bit of a problem for her, considering the five other girls that are joining the class today...
First chapter and you already have my heart melting
4526325 WHO DARES DISLIKE THE TRUTH!?
Not bad in terms of technical details and plot. There were a few errors and poor-practise things, like not spelling out the actual word for low numbers and some excessive thesaurus usage, but I've read worse. You should know, though, that when putting the clause describing the speech after it, for example '"Don't wowwy, about dat. I'ww show you." She said,' then you use a comma instead of a full stop. The only real problem for me is the baby talk- and that's not an actual problem or error, that's just me, so not bad.
4527403 Don't know who the first one was but the second one's me.
4527403 The very people who despised Equestria Girls and said it should have never existed and anything coming from that world can go f**k itself.
/me As soon as that picture at the title showed up on my screen I died instantly.
When I saw the picture than read the comments... I said "Cute... Is a sign of weakness"
MUST RESIST THE CUTENESS!!!!!
So cute cant reist awwwwwwwwwwww!
Very cute, but isn't kindergarten for fillies and volts that are a little older. Like out of diapers and able to walk. This sounds more like preschool or day care to me. Also, I have a feeling that Twinkle Shine isn't a very nice teacher.
4684334 I keep saying this to everyone who questions my fics.
LOOK AT THE TAG. "ALTERNATE UNIVERSE" THE SAME RULES MAY OR MAY NOT APPLY IN AN ALTERNATE UNIVERSE FIC. IT'S YOUR OWN PERSONAL PREFERENCE.
And no. I don't want to make Twinkleshine seem like a bad person/pony. It was bad enough when Canterlot Wedding Part 2 pulled off that shit with her, Lyra and Colgate.
I'm confused. Are they ponies or humans?
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Humans, but either he slipped a couple of times, or he is going by the logic "in EQG universe, horse terms are used to define people."
Anyway, I still kind of like it...
4696663 the picture is a massive clue.
4696744 The reason I'm asking is because of slip ups.
I hope you realize some people may want another chapter even sooner now. And: Given that Twilight is a bit smarter than the rest, wouldn't it make more sense that she was capable of better speech? I mean, If given similar situations, one might be able to compare her to The Doctor in terms of intellect. Just don't ask me for said situation! I haven't finished watching Doctor Who yet!
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That is true... partially. She would have trouble into pronuncing dental consonants and sounds, like "T" "D" and "TH."
However, the "L" sound is a labial, and the "R" one is a guttural. Both of them are not hindered by the teeth, or lack of thereof. So, while the erroneous pronunciation still makes some sense (it's difficult to know how prounucne something, if you rarely hear it or you don't have the phonetic translation), say that Twilight cannot pronunce "R" and "L" thanks to her few teeth is wrong.
4697168 Ah, thank you for that little tip. It's just been fixed based on your views.
Also, I'd like it if you updated Ab-Initio, Knowledge Is Crinkly, and Pinkie Pie & Twilight Velvet's Foalish Fun Place. That would be much appreciated.
This is a pretty cute story and why does twilight not understand things like lovely if she has her parents to teach her that stuff doesn't she get that type of affection from her parents
4701463 Sure Twilight has her parents in this, but she's was always wrapped up in learning before she moved to her new kindergarten.
That could well be the case.
Diamond tiara is not Twilight's age, but this is alternate universe so I cannot complain.
Twilight, the next toddler Piccasso.
At least we have baby Twilight the Toddler Translator!
Wow when they started learning I thought twilight would be able to count to twenty or more you should consider doing a chapter that shows the actual intelligence of Twilight.
4701983 I notice Spike is tag in your fic.
Is he gonna be Twi's puppy in the fic ?
4904422 Maybe.
Give it time though. I plan to update Rainbow's Rebirth first.
I... kidn of likes this.
The semi-philosofical discussion between the kids made my mind go into a turmoil, thought.
TO CUTE!!!!!!!!! (dies of cuteness)
Loved it! :D
im not readin this the excact day she made it but the CUTENESS IS WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY TO BAER MUCH
I love ur fanfic so much!!!
*Doesn't heed warning* It can't be that cut- hnnnnnggg W-what i-is this?! My heart its gushing with cuteness! Why didn't I listen to the warning?! *passes out from cuteness*
I really like this story hope to read more soon
also is shiny, cadence, celestia, or even luna going to be in this???
5629635 it might be a while until I return to this story as well as my others. The reason being that I've been writing a massive trilogy on The Dazzlings.
I shall return and make more chapters once I'm finished with the trilogy.
5629697 okay thank you for letting me know
Hm. Not bad. Not a huge fan of the EG universe but this fic is very cute. And sucker I am for cute.
3 out of 5 mustaches.
I love this story, I cant wait for you to return to it
Errm, is the class Twilight is in a mixed age class? Cause I'm confused why the CMC, who are probably between 8 and 12 in the show, are in the same class as the mane 6, who are all about 19-24 in the show?
Aside from that, good job! I'd like to see more of this! Have a Flutteryay! 
SO CUTE I would faint if i wernt used to these sort of things
I DEMAND MORE CHAPTERS WITH ME,THE GREAT AND POWERFUL TRIXIE!
cuteness power levels receiving...receiving...ERROR CANNOT FIND SHUTTING DOWN -shuts down from the error message, rebooting... reboot complete- over 90000
could we get a scootaloo in the next time pwease?!?! ack lisp
ack the cuteness -system error, too much cuteness, explodes into a plie of confetti, for the children, minutes for reboot to be reassigned to 2:00 minutes, please stand by-
How cute!