This is the story of one Mark Crow a seemingly normal eighteen-year-old in Equestria. Found by Celestia in a machine that had him frozen and protected from the ravages of time. However he is more than what he seems, I mean he did save the world.
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not bad still need to make some space try makeing a line for each spoken word
So far this just screams self insert. Someone with that many years under their belt is not gonna speak like a casual college student.
Well. There it goes. I had hopes for this, but it smells of a self insert wish fufillment fic. The dude sounds super intelligent, wise even, yet he's acting like 20 year old doofus. I hope its because he's gone slightly insane from the cryo process/time in cryo or else im dropping this.
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Well it did say that he had black hair. That kind of implies that he's still in a body that's in it's prime from when he got immortality, it was just exhausted when he went into cryosleep.
From cool misterious guy to a normal idiot of this time