Gothic Lolita / Kind Pegasus
Fluttershy was running though the Everfree forest holding Discord's paw. There was yelling in the background.
"Fluttershy! Give us Discord!" Fluttershy heard Rainbow in a angry tone.
"Oh, how could this happened? Can't they see that Discord is reformed?" Fluttershy said to herself tears going down her cheeks. She looked back at Discord. There was fear in his eyes. A face that nopony ever saw Discord make. Fluttershy took her eyes off of Discord to forced the path in front of them.
*music starts*
*Fluttershy*
How chaotic are you?
I'm the element of kindness you'll ever be.
I've been in love with you ever since we met.
And heart broken only two or three.
I'm just to shy telling you.
My heart was happy in your hooves.
The kind of chaos where nopony dies
But I don't suppose you'd understand.
*Ponyville*
Call off the search
We've found him
*Fluttershy*
If I am a Pegasus.
Then you are a Draconequus.
And you should have never be turn to stone.
By the elements of harmony.
The law wants to arrest you
The world wants to detest you
To me you never did anything
Any pony wouldn't do
I'm a kind Pegasus
And you are a Draconequus
I'm not even legal
I'm just a shy little Pegasus
But smile and tear
and kind sweet faces
Directed your chaotic hooves
I perfectly understand
So, it's not your fault
You are not evil.
Thank you, kind pony
You made me what I am today
A pony that been struck by the pony of love
But those three words
I'm still afraid to say
I just to shy to tell you
Now that I love you
I couldn't stop loving you
Even if my friends hate you
*Ponyville*
Call off the search
We've found him
*Fluttershy*
If I am a Pegasus.
Then you are a Draconequus.
And you should have never be turn to stone.
By the elements of harmony.
The law wants to arrest you
The world wants to detest you
To me you never did anything
Any pony wouldn't do
I'm a kind Pegasus
And you are a Draconequus
I'm not even legal
I'm just a shy little Pegasus
But smile and tear
and kind sweet faces
Directed your chaotic hooves
I perfectly understand
So, it's not your fault
You are not evil.
As Fluttershy and Discord ran, Fluttershy tripped over the root of a tree sending them crashing down. Fluttershy could hear the mob getting closer. Fluttershy looked at Discord and said
"Go, Discord. Teleport yourself out of here. I'll hold them off while you escape." Discord looked at Fluttershy with worried eyes
"No I am not leaving you here. You are my one and only friend and I am not going to let you go." Discord said hugging Fluttershy warmly. Fluttershy smiled up at Discord putting both hooves on his cheek.
*Fluttershy*
I am your friend
I am your protector
I am your anti-chaos dream
I am your friend
I am your protector
I am your anti-chaos dream
I am your friend
I am your protector
I am your anti-chaos dream
I am your friend
I am your protector
*Rainbow Dash*
I am your worst nightmare
Now we are going to turn you back to stone
*Ponyville*
Call off the search
We've found him
Fluttershy looked around and saw all the ponies from ponyville in a circle around them. Twilight, Rarity, Applejack, Rainbow Dash, and Pinkie were in front of them wearing their elements. Fluttershy hugged Discord tightly.
"Fluttershy, why are you helping that monster?" Rainbow said in a angry tone.
"Rainbow, can you even see that Discord is reformed. That he is nicer and not using his magic for evil." Fluttershy said back to Rainbow in her normal quiet tone.
"Oh yeah, I see that he tried to flood Applejack's home." Rainbow replied
"That is because he didn't know better! Now he is nice and warm and using his magic for good!" Fluttershy protested
"Sorry sugar cube but we have to put him back into stone." Applejack said taking down her hat.
"No! You can't!" Fluttershy screamed.
Twilight used her magic to bring the kicking and screaming Fluttershy and put her element on her. Discord was standing there looking heart broken. He was looking at Fluttershy the whole time. Most ponies were surprise that Discord was just standing there and not getting away. Twilight was about to start to do the spell to turn Discord to stone, when Fluttershy screamed.
"NO! CAN'T YOU PONIES SEE THAT I LOVE HIM?!"
All the ponies looked at Fluttershy in a surprise. Nopony in a million years thought that the element of kindness fall in love with the Master of Chaos. Discord looked at Fluttershy in awe. He never thought anypony would love him.
"Thank you Fluttershy. I love you too." Discord said with a smile a warm smile.
Twilight started back up with the spell. All the elements started to glow. Fluttershy crying for she is going to loss the pony she ever loved. The rainbow started to form. It was up in the air when Discord said,
"I'll ever forget you Fluttershy."
The rainbow was almost about to hit him when Fluttershy broke out of the magic that combined their elements and started racing towards Discord.
"Fluttershy! No!" The ponies screamed at Fluttershy.
Twilight tried to take back the spell but it was too late. The rainbow hit Discord and Fluttershy. When the rainbow cleared what showed was Discord holding Fluttershy looking down at her smiling. Fluttershy was looking up at Discord with her loving eyes and warm smile, You could tell they were happy be together, even if they were turned to stone. What stood out was that Fluttershy was still wearing her Element. Meaning they could never get her back.
Fluttershy woke up from her dream. She could still remember everything that happened in her dream.From when she and Discord were running from her friends and Ponyville to when she was turned to stone with Discord. She smiled at the thought that she was turned to stone with Discord. She got out of bed and walked out of her room to see Discord sleeping on her couch. Fluttershy smiled and went over to Discord to kiss him on the forehead. Before leaving Discord to go back to bed. Fluttershy said in a sweet, quiet tone that only she could hear.
"I love you Discord."
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O sweet and cute
Awww. Thanks.
Oh so this was a dream, now it make sense
Yeah. I like putting twist in my stories.
I love the idea of fluttershy and discord as the main characters. Go Fluttercord!!!!
Ten out of Ten mustaches
4646768 Thanks
In the lyrics I this you made a mistake. You wrote:
I am your friend
I am your projecter.
Was it meant to be projecter?
Otherwise brilliant story!
4651256 lol I mean protector. My kindle must of change it.
I'll go change it now.
aw so cute
4852509 Thanks
you for got never
is should said that they can never ever get Fluttershy back.
I was actually thinking of making a fanfic similar to this (before I read this)
Sweet and Cute. But I have one problem, remember when Discord transformed the Element Bearers into their opposite, they couldn't use their elements because none of them really cared. So if Fluttershy didn't really consider them her friends or nice at that moment or wasn't willing to turn Discord to stone, why did the elements still work? Shouldn't they just splutter with some magic then return to normal because they can only work as a whole?
5325471 This story takes place after Keep Calm and Flutter On. Like a after mass (I don't want to do any spoilers for the ponies that didn't read this).
I even put that on the description. I guess you didn't see it. But it's ok, everypony makes mistakes. Even me.
5325587 I know it's after Keep Calm and Flutter on, I mean now, if Fluttershy isn't willing to put Discord back in stone, why did the elements work?
5325654 Fluttershy is still in her kind state. The Elements need honesty, kindness, laughter, generosity, loyalty, and magic. When they were in their discorded state, they weren't acting their elements. So the elements didn't work. The Element of Harmony (for what I believe) will still work because Fluttershy is still acting her element. She is being kind to Discord and she wants to project him.
Not the greatest grammar, but still a good story. I wouldn't mind editing it for you if you want. I love the idea, though... What if it turned out that she dreamed it was a dream while she was in stone...
I could edit if you wanted... Just PM me if you want.
In blue are the corrections. In red are the things that are being corrected. Hope you don't mind!
(To: fluttercord4ever)
heard.
looked, took and forced.
tripped, the and could.
comma, not period and cheek.
comma, not period.
Again, comma.
protested and comma.
surprised and when Fluttershy screamed,
It should be: THAT I LOVE HIM?!"
Okay, surprise, fall in love with the Master of Chaos it's a title, capitalize. Discord looked at Fluttershy in awe. He never thought anypony would love him. The rainbow started to form. It was up in the air when Discord said, "I'll never forget you, Fluttershy." started racing towards Discord.
but it was too late. The rainbow hit Discord and Fluttershy.
warm smile, You could tell that they were happy to be together, even if they were turned to stone. What stood out was that Fluttershy was still wearing her Element. Meaning they could never get her back.
She could still remember, From when she and Discord were, Ponyville, to when she, was turned to stone with Discord., She smiled at the thought that she was turned to stone with Discord, Fluttershy smiled and went over to Discord to kiss him, comma, sweet, quiet tone that only she could hear,
5410622 Um, nice catches but not all dialogue end in commas and do you know which tense the author was writing in?
5342998 But she is being more kind to Discord, not to her friendships
Allow not aloud
I wish I knew what song it wastarts played with, but if it is your own original then you are more amazing than I thought! A great writer that tricked me with the oldest trick in the book, a dream.