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one of those things were there is a song and a story in it.
time- somewhere after keep calm and flutter on
story- Fluttershy and Discord are running from Twilight, Rarity, AJ, RD, Pinkie Pie, and the ponies from Ponyville. They want Discord back to stone, but Fluttershy would not aloud it.
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O sweet and cute
Awww. Thanks.
Oh so this was a dream, now it make sense
Yeah. I like putting twist in my stories.
I love the idea of fluttershy and discord as the main characters. Go Fluttercord!!!!
Ten out of Ten mustaches
4646768 Thanks
In the lyrics I this you made a mistake. You wrote:
I am your friend
I am your projecter.
Was it meant to be projecter?
Otherwise brilliant story!
4651256 lol I mean protector. My kindle must of change it.
I'll go change it now.
aw so cute
4852509 Thanks
you for got never
is should said that they can never ever get Fluttershy back.
I was actually thinking of making a fanfic similar to this (before I read this)
Sweet and Cute. But I have one problem, remember when Discord transformed the Element Bearers into their opposite, they couldn't use their elements because none of them really cared. So if Fluttershy didn't really consider them her friends or nice at that moment or wasn't willing to turn Discord to stone, why did the elements still work? Shouldn't they just splutter with some magic then return to normal because they can only work as a whole?
5325471 This story takes place after Keep Calm and Flutter On. Like a after mass (I don't want to do any spoilers for the ponies that didn't read this).
I even put that on the description. I guess you didn't see it. But it's ok, everypony makes mistakes. Even me.
5325587 I know it's after Keep Calm and Flutter on, I mean now, if Fluttershy isn't willing to put Discord back in stone, why did the elements work?
5325654 Fluttershy is still in her kind state. The Elements need honesty, kindness, laughter, generosity, loyalty, and magic. When they were in their discorded state, they weren't acting their elements. So the elements didn't work. The Element of Harmony (for what I believe) will still work because Fluttershy is still acting her element. She is being kind to Discord and she wants to project him.
Not the greatest grammar, but still a good story. I wouldn't mind editing it for you if you want. I love the idea, though... What if it turned out that she dreamed it was a dream while she was in stone...
I could edit if you wanted... Just PM me if you want.
In blue are the corrections. In red are the things that are being corrected. Hope you don't mind!
(To: fluttercord4ever)
heard.
looked, took and forced.
tripped, the and could.
comma, not period and cheek.
comma, not period.
Again, comma.
protested and comma.
surprised and when Fluttershy screamed,
It should be: THAT I LOVE HIM?!"
Okay, surprise, fall in love with the Master of Chaos it's a title, capitalize. Discord looked at Fluttershy in awe. He never thought anypony would love him. The rainbow started to form. It was up in the air when Discord said, "I'll never forget you, Fluttershy." started racing towards Discord.
but it was too late. The rainbow hit Discord and Fluttershy.
warm smile, You could tell that they were happy to be together, even if they were turned to stone. What stood out was that Fluttershy was still wearing her Element. Meaning they could never get her back.
She could still remember, From when she and Discord were, Ponyville, to when she, was turned to stone with Discord., She smiled at the thought that she was turned to stone with Discord, Fluttershy smiled and went over to Discord to kiss him, comma, sweet, quiet tone that only she could hear,
5410622 Um, nice catches but not all dialogue end in commas and do you know which tense the author was writing in?
5342998 But she is being more kind to Discord, not to her friendships
Allow not aloud
I wish I knew what song it wastarts played with, but if it is your own original then you are more amazing than I thought! A great writer that tricked me with the oldest trick in the book, a dream.