Heehee! Hi! I'm just your ordinary mare who enjoys a good story or two~ Mostly I write stories for my lovely Feather Dancer, but sometimes I'm willing to share with you guys. ;)
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Good story! It was fun to read and well-written. You get a fav, thumbs up and a follow.
poor naive spike
Ohh... i liked it dude, really good story
I'll bet that, after she was done with Twilight, Dashie probably went to ravish Gilda.
BTW, you might not want to use the word "she" as often as you did. I found myself having to constantly re-read sentences to figure out whether you are talking about Rainbow Dash, or Twilight. I'm still gonna give your story a well-deserved thumbs-up, though.
I couldn't really understand what was happening.
Why did Twilight all of a sudden turn lustful?
Just saying? According to Twilight's description of the spell in canon... she'd need to find a gryphon to copy.
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Ooh, you're right! Usually I'm so good with that. Anyways, I wanted to just write a fun little story! Besides, it's not like Twilight doesn't know countless of other spells, hee hee!
8461413 That's true. If one pony would figure out a way to circumvent the restrictions, it'd be Twilight. Or miss Screw-the-rules-i-have-magic (Starlight)._