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Nick was brought to Equestria for more than just one reason. He's taught Twilight Sparkle the value of love. But their story isn't over. No, not nearly. They are in love, they have foals on the way, and now they've got to deal with a villain that Twilight has tackled before, but Nick has no idea that exists.
A Sequel to A New Teacher
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I'm excited!! XD
And boom, off to a great start!
4648993 If you had heard the hours of talking my wife and I have done to hammer out the outline for the story, you would be as excited as I am. And I'm bouncing like Pinkie Pie when it comes to loving this story. I got chills at some of the story elements we've come up with. Now I just have to flesh them out. And that can be a challenge.
4651366 awesome XD I can't wait !
So much love i feal like my heart is going to …boom!
Good story cant whait for the next chapter
It's so awesome *RDAwesomeFaceXD*
“Greetings Nick. I have been informed of you, and some of the other humans my sister has brought here.”
*earperks* Ohhh..? Others? Luna HAS been busy! Will he ever meet any, or is it just a writing prompt for others to follow?
4714222 I dont expect any to follow with this. Yes, nick will find others. He is intensely curious about other humans, but he is mission focused right now.
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We are pony, resistance is futile, you will be assimilated into the collective.
Yes. Because all the authors try to make us think they killed off the main character.
4729052 all that is required is that the ponies believe it.
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Not to be insulting to those who are mentally challenged, but anyone with half a brain should be able to tell that the central character of a book is not likely to actually be dead. It is most commonly a plot device to build suspense. Which is why Game of Thrones shocked so many people.
4737907 My editor made a very good point, I'm not trying to make the reader be deceived, the ones who think Nick is dead are the ponies. That's why I wrote the little scene at the end of chapter 3.
This is getting interesting XD
I'm curious as to why you went with an action/adventure sequel as to more of a slice of life sequel
4990350 it's the story that spoke to me. My wife and I came up with the plot and. Found we really liked it. I'm planning on nick and twilight to be a trilogy, the third won't be as action specific. But with this one I wanted to focus on their relationship when times aren't easy. And show exactly how dedicated he is to her, and how deeply she loves him to.
4990859 I see. I was just wondering. I'll let it be known what's I think bout it ina bit
murder and mayhem await
ok sprky brony here is the deal either you get back to work on this story or I am going to apply hove to flank. ^_^
how dare you let us all hanging like this.
harts fire.
I know I haven't been updating this story as much, I am thinking about it, but I can't force it. It will be completed, but it's taking time.
Dust is on the front burner for right now, but this story is still going strong. I guarantee it! 
I under stand how that is you cant force a story it just has to happen. and I know dust is just flowing right now and as a righter you have to go with the flow or things will just fall to apart.
so as pinky would say party on.
hum twi Warrior Princess it kind of has a ring to it. but her finding out about her life span this way that is a bit rough. but if memory serves nick should life some ware around 100+ years.
do I see a possible way to introduce irony shieldbraker here.?
makes one wonder as her saving princes twilights life was never really given out in you other story.
5059256 no, sadly irony is not in this story, and Discord isn't a malevolent force in this story. But that being said, I'm reviewing what I've written and will be writing more. In fact, I'll be writing this story exclusively for a while.
I was just wondering.
I kind of new the answer but wanted to throw it out any way.
this is a vary nice surprise to find this story back up and hitting the ground hard.
and a even nicer surprise lighting dust is in it. wooot wooot .
Update XD
cant wate for the update XD
just a little nudge are you around sparky brony? this story is in need of a little attention.
5248241 I've got a bit over 1k words written not enough for a chapter, but I'll be getting it going as soon as my muse directs me in this direction.
i can totally relate to how your muse is working, if and when you feel it pull in this direction it will happen till then keep your wings lose and sore on.
The buggy flank, it shall be kicked.
this is going to be one battle I wish I code be there to witness.
I am hoping this story keeps progressing a little more often, but them I do understand how it is when you (sparky brony) have a chapter just screaming at you to be out on one of your other story's.
but be warned I will bother you from time to time. after all this story is really good.
maybe you can turn this story over to a pony in your family to work on it and you just put the final touch on it share the work load.
harts fire.
Nice story. I hope to see updates soon. I wonder if nick will become an alicorn so that he and twilight can be together.
The Princess of Friendship is a Warrior Princess.
This may sound like a terrible idea, and that may be because it is; are you thinking of perhaps bringing in Moose to help out somehow?
YAY!!! i also wonder where cadence and shining are in all of this? can the crystal empire be taken down too!
after reading this chapter for the well that is not important right now. I hade one thought in my head for when nick was flying with the dragons.
I was seeing a video the hole time and I am really sure S B know the video I am thinking of as he was nice enough to share it with me a little time ago. so I will share it with you readers.
Harts Fire
ok I am surprised Twilight is tacking this so good.
I was thinking huge mushroom cloud.
Twilight is pretty much destroyed in this chapter.
the weight of the crown ways heavy upon my soul.
yep I am back reading this story it is just that good.
I love Cadance as a badass here!
Derpy is on the job and possibly joining or should I say expanding Twilight and nicks herd.
And when did Cadance turn in to a super bad ass.
Harts Fire
wow I was sleeping the first time I read this chapter.
there is so much going on bugs drama love war and now a draft in Equestria.
this hole story is really shaping up to get supper good really fast.
but who am I kidding this is the norm for a Sparky Brony story.
and just a little poke at Phenrys you sire were the first author to follow me, I tip my hat to you good sir.
Harts Fire
rock on princesses and now the battle really gets going griffins and dragons it is about to get real.
Harts Fire
O this is going to be good. Twilight is pissed and now has a way to get to the hart of the problem.
Hold on the ride may be a little bumpy.
love the chapter and it looks as if things are finally turning around. but I know better after all this is a SB story.
Harts Fire
WOW just WOW that is how to wright a battle.
this is one rock solid chapter.
Harts Fire
Good good
some how I have a feeling that this battle is going way out side the norm for a equestrian battle. there is going to be death and a lot of it.
A vary good chapter with a tasty cliffhanger.
on a side not I am surprised to see this chapter as I know you are spending time on one of your other story's , not complaining at all.