Curious as to what it was like to fly, a young Pegasus goes for a flight above her village, all while holding on tightly to her mother's back.
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This is really cute. One thing, though? AJ says she still has to go to school and then it's so late in the day that the sun is setting. That's a little confusing.
What was with the electricity jumping around Blitz Bolt? Will you wake a sequel explaining this? That aside, Nice story bro/sis.
At first I thought it was early morning, and then it was evening? The mentioning that Blitz had school to go to and chores, and then it was night was a little confusing. It wasn't anything too serious, but could use a little clarification.
A nice story. Thumbs up.
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Probably meant to say something along the lines of "she has school in the morning"
that is the shortest oneshot I've ever read...yet it was still pready bucking amazing. have a moustache
>> Tealove
Yes, I meant to say she had school the next morning. Sorry for the confusion on that bit.
EDIT: Okay! I hope the small changes I made clarify a few things, hehe ^^;
Where did you get that pic for the cover?
=O my old prof pic!! you dont believe me?, search 1800_SCREWED into google images, dont worry its fine that is one awesome pic!(why i had it)
All of my D'AAAAAAAAAWS... you can have them.
