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BattleMaestro


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Rainbow Dash needs to go to the dentist to have an impacted tooth removed. Rainbow Dash hasn't been to a dentist,ever since the last one found the tooth, and tried to remove it. However, the pain is starting to become more than she can bear.

When Twilight and Applejack find out, they insist that Rainbow Dash has it removed. What happens, when Rainbow Dash refuses to go?


My first one-shot. The idea came to me on the way to have my wisdom teeth removed. I think it's a cool story idea. I've had the idea for a while now, so I decided to go through with it, and I needed a break from my other story.

Proofread by lighting dash 13

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Comments ( 21 )

I love this I what moor please um if that's ok with you:fluttershyouch::heart::heart::heart::heart::rainbowlaugh:

4874599 I wasn't really planning on it. I suppose I could think about it.

A great little slice of life/one shot. :ajsmug: i thought Rainbow was a bit too emotional for her character, but I thought the whole thing overall was cute. :twilightsmile: Good job.

I think you have RD down perfectly. Especially her thought process :rainbowlaugh: Good work:heart:

This was surprisingly cute. :rainbowkiss:

4915292 surprisingly? Please tell me why exactly you thought it was cute? (i don't really think it is.) And what made you think it wouldn't be cute, I'm curious about the "surprising" part, like, you weren't expecting it to be?

Great story. Almost the same as mine when I had my wisdom teeth removed. 1.there was tv in the operation room 2. My mom was in the operation room till I fell asleep. Gosh glad it's over but I remember funny memories of that day and I'm not scared now I can tell my family and friends it ain't that bad. Again great story!

5076734 Thank you! I myself was a little worried, but I got through it fine myself. The worst part was the pain afterwards.

5078790 your welcome ya I forgot you get sore after and dealing with a chipmunk cheeks I ate a lot of Wendy's frosty durning my recovery for days lol

5078813 I only had pudding and jello. I certainly learned to appreciate jello though.

5078855 I see did you had dissolve stitches I did and accidentaly touch it with my tongue and it sting bad

5081095 Yes. I had the dissolving stitches. The same happened, if really anything touched them, it hurt.

I only read the description so far. My reactions
HUH WHAT NOW?
Wait.....
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Oh crap

5360865 Is that a good 'oh crap,' or a bad 'oh crap?'

5363484
Is there such thing as a good 'oh crap'? :rainbowhuh: A bad 'oh crap as in' WHAT THE BUCK IS GOIN DOWN RIGHT NOW!

This was well written, but you should change the status to "Complete"

I've read this story at least 4 times total now, and I feel confident saying this:

Oh no...they’re gone. No...I screwed up again.

Rainbow began hyperventilating, eyes wide, soaked in tears of panic.

They...they left me. I’ve got no one left to help me. This- OW tooth is never going to get better. I’m gonna starve to death. I’m gonna die. All becau- OUCH! All because of my stubbornness.

They wouldn’t have left you, if you had told them what was wrong in the first place.

Shut up brain yo- Owoowowowowowowowowowowow. You KNOW I CAN’T.

Yes you can! They’re still- Ouchouchouchowow! HERE!

I- Ouch! This pain is rediculou- OUCH! Ow, that one really hurt. Look you know I can’t tell them. They’d laugh at- OOOOUUUUUUCH

TELL THEM!

NO!

TELL THEM!

OUCH…

OKAY!

I don't know why, but something about that bit makes it my favorite Rainbow Dash moment in any fanfic so far.

4875732
Hey, BattleMaestro.
I just wanted to let you know that I really like your story. So much that I did a dramatic reading of it.
Here's the video link to my dramatic reading of it.

Video Link: Dramatic Reading #1: My Little Pony Fan-fiction "Rainbow Dash Goes to the Dentist"

I hope you like it. :twilightsmile:

Me while reading this fanfic : :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh:

It was a comedy, alright!!!
Though, saying 'darling' is Rarity's thing and not Applejack's.

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