(I need to put something here eventually...)
Hey, my names Snowfire and I'm a dragon. Now now, don't start with the running and the screaming, please. You have no idea how old that gets. Trust me. I wouldn't even be bugging you all, except I kinda wanna keep myself turned from a crispy critter by your Princess. Apparently I'm supposed to learn about 'Friendship'...
...but yea...
...it's kind of hard to do that when you all keep running away
...just like that.
Aw Buck this.
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I enjoyed the idea of it, even if I'm partially against the underlying premise, and with that said, I'd like to read more
Not bad really... but we have NO idea who this character is and why he is in this situation. But im sure its explained later.
Besides being really confused, the only complaint i had was he isnt exactly a likeable character. At least for me.
6/10
4887052 Glad you like the idea, but what about the premise is rubbing you the wrong way?
4887057 Thanks for the input, Hopefully the character grows on you a bit, but Ill try and work on the characterization a bit more. I'm not sure I'm understanding whats so confusing however? (Its been a long time since I've written for others to read)
4887117 I just meant were kinda thrown in to this dragon fighting a storm and waking in a mystery place scenario. We dont know the character at all so he didnt appeal to me and i didnt know what he was talking about. But since this is unfinished i should probably hold that thought until maybe a third chapter as im guessing it will be explained later.
4887117 I meant the underlying premise of an evil being bent on taking over a kingdom... and it seemed like he was trying to take over equestria, which was why I brought that point up, but it's not a bad thing, necessarily
shame this doesn't get more people reading/commenting on it... maybe it's because of the way you started it, but it's really starting to pick up! (plus the fact that there's virtually no other Spike+dragoness fics out there, which would explain the odd start)
Hey cheer up, I read it
4897329 huh, do you think it would be worth it to have them rewritten? I was thinking of doing that a bit later, but if its a issue I can bump it up the priority list. I guess this sort of ties in with with what Corgii said eariler
4898035 I meant the content of it: it seemed to have nearly nothing to do with MLP at the time, but it's only a guess as to why it's not liked/read more... plus, I wouldn't want to keep you from writing more
4897329 My thoughts exactly. It can be difficult seeing as how the show has never portrayed any female dragons,but it's an adorable idea.
Keep it turning dude. It's really promising.
Dragoness you say? *leans back in chair* you have my undivided attention, dear author.
Cor blimey that was much betta than I's expectin, even from an already great story like this'n
I liked this chapter. Heh, twilight trying to hug a dragon against its will, not the wisest of ideas...
Luna flurting
Liking this so far. Can't wait for more!
Now that's an idea
More please
If Snowfire was voiced, what would she sound like?
write more words
MOAR
This is a fun story. Looking forward to more!
It's a shame that this story is dead
R.I.P.