When a confused blue pegasus seeks help from Princess Celestia and gets sent for memory help to Twilight Sparkle right before the MLP FIM TV series, what could possibly go wrong? A lot, that's what.
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I'm a bit confused, but I think I'll hold off on rating until I read more. Not bad for a first story, though.
As a note: I favorited this story because I don't care enough to use the tracking thing. I'll come back once this is updated.
You've peaked my interest, I'm gonna track, for now
I was wondering when I would see this here. Took awhile though.
I already read it on fanfiction
hi remembers his name, yey
Now I'm curious which song he was singing
Personally, I think it was either Live and Learn or All Hail Shadow, both by Crush 40
Please obey to Sunbutt, she isn´t used to Ponys which don´t love her at first sight.
"What you have a problem? go to Twilight, do i look like a powerful magical Pony or a princess of a whole kingdom?.........well duh, that´s why i am to busy to help you, go to Twilight." (sorry it is not because of your fanfiction, just because i have seen it often enough like that, i still like it i just wanted to say something about it.
It is interessting enough for me to want more, but i would like the chapter to be a bit longer, i don´t care if it should be small talk or something like that. Please try to make the romance between Sonic and dash not to fast, i would like her to be a bit shy, at least if they are alone in special situations (i can´t think of one right now). I guess i could like a jealous Rainbow Dash too.
what?
random?
well i know he forgot who he is, but it is new that Sonic want to dance, maybe his new feelings make him want it. I hope you don´t deepen their relationship to soon.
I like the idea of the story and the story is not bad so far, but i would say you should not rush the rest of the story. I don´t say you have done it, but i guess if you would want to do it, you could have made the party a bit longer. Take your time to explain everything, i just feel like i should give that advice right now.
This could be so good, maybe finally a good Sonic/Dash story.
Not sure if i already had written this, but i hope he can stay in their world, and doesn´t have to leave her.
Normally i would prefer a slow paced relationship, but somehow i would not mind if they would admit their feelings in one or two chapters already, it seems to be okay in this story.
Not sure how long you actually wanted this story to be, but i would like this if they are already together befor you have written the first half of the story. It is really rare that i can actually read about two special someponys how they live together, it is mostly only how they confess their love, and after that the story is finished.
I think i remember most of the story, however i actually liked that Rainbow was so jealous this time.
At the end it feels a bit rushed, i don´t know why, maybe it ends to sudden, however good chapter.
Ah, so you finally wandered over here. You should add the Dark tag soon, unless you do something different.
Did anyone tried to get the Emerald back? not that important for me, but no one mentioned to get it back from Gilda, or Shadow.
Till now it is still okay, but i hope you doesn´t plan to get everyone of Sonics friends into Ponyville, i would like it if not Eggman or most of his friends would not come to Equestria, sometimes i feel like it would be to crowded for the story if everyone should arrive, and that would probably be the moment the story would get weird somehow.
I hope you plan to get Rainbow and Cobalt together far befor the story is over, it would be nice.
Good idea with Metal-Sonic!?, i think it is him, does he have his special form?, i mean because he things he could kill them all.
Nice chapter, i like this slightly different Rainbow, and i like it that she is acting shy around Cobalt, well a little bit shy.
This chapter really shows, how the main six more or less are the mean ones.
What she did to Rarity was mean, but no one told her to go onto the stage.
With Rainbow Dash i think, well she challenged Trixie in with her own will, but i guess Trixie didn´t have to beat her that way.
Okay with Cobalt here, i can´t say much to help Trixie this time.
I think you have to give it a different Name, Sonic Boom (
) or well not very creative (blueboom); since it has no Rainbow Color.
Please don´t add to many Characters, i hope this isn´t Tails. I like Tails, but he isn´t my favourite either, but i am mostly against him, because i think that to many Characters from Sonic would not be good for the story. Just my opinion, but i have nothing against the Enemys.
I have honestly seen only bad stuff, that had Sonics whole group in it, because of that i am saying exactly this.
Nice chapter, but in the show i think they punished Trixie for a Tale she had probably made up for her show, and even if she was boasting about it, i hinks she just needs the attention.
Most of the others challenged her, and more or less agreed with everything that could happen in that Challenge, i mean they never said what she could not do, but it is just a kids show, so i don´t expect it to think that much about it.
Suprisingly I think it was a nice idea for his poison joke illness, but I would have liked it, if he had changed his love Victim more often.
Well nice chapter, I can´t say much more tonight, it is a bit to late for that.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=umDr0mPuyQc
Wait... that ending... you mean... SHADOW?!
YES!!!! YEEEEEESSSS!!!!!!!!
new chapter please
This chapter, i like it! cdn.meme.am/instances/250x250/43671505/thor-another-another.jpg
I hope you update this story soon, it's really good!
So....sonic forgot everything, and he had a wing boner just by thing of "girl?"
Awwwww~
Sonics dream, me: eyyyyyy
🎤🎼Ive got a crush in you~ sweete pie! All the ady and nightime~ hear me sigh! I~~~!!!! never had the least notion. That i could fall~ with so much emotion~~!🎤🎼
Shadow, me: *FANGIRL SCREAM*
Im geussing tals maby?
Cant wait for the next chapter!
I imagined a piano synthesia of “Gotta Go Fast” playing in the background every time Sonic, well, went fast.
When will Eggman appear?
It could be metal sonic.