In this series of erotic one-shots, mares from across Equestria open up their diaries to a total stranger and reveal their deepest secrets - tales of love, passion, lust, and betrayal.
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I thought you did a god job with the lead up in particular in this chapter (I did not read the other chapters since Pinkie is the character I am interested in reading). I thought the idea of Pinkie and Bon Bon hooking up because of their situation works for this story. As for the pairing it is certainly uncommon but I liked it. I normally read stories with Pinkie and Rainbow Dash, Twilight Sparkle, or Big Mac but this was fun though one thing I would have liked to see is more info of Pinkie trying to date others sort of like Bon Bon did (I know you did give something I just think it would have been good to mention a character we know too).
One question that I would want answered but was not was whether Bon Bon and Pinkie are an item or are they just enjoying each others company when they need it? The ending makes me think the second but I am not sure especially with how Pinkie is unattached and Bon Bon is on the rocks with Lyra.
I would not mind seeing more chapters with Pinkie in the same continuity or a different one.
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Thanks for the comment, and I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! Though Fluttershy is sad that you didn't read her chapter. (just joking)
To answer your question, Pinkie and Bon just happen to be at the right place at the right time - and have a shared need, so to speak. Now that you mention it though, they could work well together in a longer term arrangement... *files away idea for future study* :D
Thanks again!
GMP
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I was also curious because if Bon Bon does not break up with Lyra then she is going to continuously be cheating on her. Granted they are on the rocks but that is still objectionable to many especially if they did not break up. Makes for an interesting story as right now then they feel good but does BB feel guilty? Does Pinkie Pie? Do they want to be together or do one or both think of it as a one time thing? Do they want a relationship or do they prefer not being attached (particularly BB since she is having a bad experience while being in a relationship rather than Pinkie who does not mention being in a relationship). There are a lot of potential questions (which is a good thing honestly).
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Good points indeed, and they get right at the heart of the unstated quandaries that were a key part of the TV show that I'm basing this story on. (see link in bottom of story description).
On the TV show, the characters would disregard pretense and possible consequences and embrace the moment. For the most part, I'm sure the average viewers didn't think too far past the end of an episode, but in the end, the characters were left with questions/possibilities not unlike the ones you just mentioned. How they deal with them - if they deal with them at all - is left unsaid, but does leave the door open for further exploration.
I've got many other things on my plate at the moment, but I may just have to circle back to our two confectionery queens for an expanded story. ;)
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Interestingly while the original characters would react that way in this case I think these characters would be very different. I will keep an eye out for any additional stories from this idea.
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Thanks!
Drugs or an aphrodisiac of some sort, I guess. Don't do drugs Pinkie, think of poor Littlepip!
Huh. Didn't see that coming. I was close anyway if you stretch the definition of 'drug' to include liquor.
Ask Twilight to use hers. No, not the canon one! The G4M one. Nobody has time for EqG.
Message received, Mr. Bean.
That's more appetizing than the one made out of wood, I'll admit.
Just thinking about it gives me the urge to pee.
Strangely, I also have a headcanon where she mercy-fucks people/ponies. Great minds and all...
That's pretty hot.
Possession. Add apostrophe.
As for the sex scene, pretty good. It's not often you see muzzles used during sex. Onto the next chapter!
Not sure if this was site error, but all this code popped up on my screen in the middle of the story:
Edit: F*CK IT! I AM NOT GOING TO CONDENSE 50,000 CHARACTERS OF CODE!