It's been a bad day for you. And it only gets worse when you com home from school to find a changing on your bed, hogging your pillow. Your soft precious pillow, that you'd been looking forward to all day. You're not too happy about it.
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Just a little something that I came up with, after thinking about changelings. I'm aware that this isn't a terribly original story idea, and if it seems too much like other stories I'll take it down. Also, this is my first-ish attempt at comedy. You've been warned.
Chapters (1)
Hogging your bed.
5124734 Thank you, I'll fix that right away
SHUT UP AND TAKE MY MONIES!!!
It purrs!
Is that right?
5124924 Indeed it does.
5124927 Actually, it seems to be correct.
5124920 Hmm, I think your right to point that out. I think the correct form is "It's". Anyway, thanks for spotting that
5124941 A comment does not allow me to get if your being sarcastic or not.
However, I am pretty sure it is spelled Changling not Changing.
Other then that, I spot not mistakes. Well done with this Mr Authorman.
5124962 Um, sorry. I didn't mean to sound sarcastic. I meant , I went back and checked, and I had written changeling, not changeing. Sorry for any confusion
. Anyway, thank you for the compliment
P.S. It's Miss Autherwoman
5124980 I am so sorry.
Here I blame other people saying "There are pegasisters out there" when I myself never assume that any one is a woman.
5125041 Quite alright
I've seen worse.
At least your story has decent execution thus far.
I don't have anything to point out in terms of grammatical errors, and story wise I have nothing to offer.
Thus, I sit in this chair in mute silence, waiting for the next chapter.
5125100 Holy crap! I just realized that this says incomplete! I am sooo embarrassed. This is actually a one shot
Amateur authors imitate.
Mature authors steal.
^.^
(Really, as long as you're not copy/pasting anything, you shouldn't worry about 'borrowing' others' ideas.)
I'm flattered if I've actually managed to begin a trend.
5125189 Oh, okay good
I was afraid that people would say it was too similar to "Celestia is in you bed", which I won't deny, partially inspired this story. But anyway, thanks for that bit of reassurance.
5125114
<- wishes so badly that it wasn't a one shot.
Honestly, as much as I liked the Celestia in your bed story, this has seriously struck something within me (probably because I'm not a huge Celestia fan). I loved it to the end. THE. ENTIRE. STORY. Not many stories can honestly have the same things said for (I will not mention which do). Good job.
..... Still want more baby changeling in the bed. Cute as hell.......
Aww, that was adorable! Now I want to see a changeling on my pillow.
It's...
So...
CUTE!!!
I LOVE IT!
I am content and satisfied with your story, but that may be an understatement to what I am about to say next:
DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAW!
A few grammar errors, but the story is good.
"home. Then" missed a space there.
Got a period in past there.
This was cute. I do love me a cute changeling story.
I love this, even if it is short, normaly i don´t even like one chapter storys.
I would like it if you turn this into a large fanfiction with many chapters. Since the Changeling seems to be a Baby it would probably an adoption fanfiction.
You made that changeling really cute as he was tearing at the pillow.
5126685 Thanks for spotting those
(I really need to get an editor
).
5125417 Wow, thanks
5125876 Thanks for spotting those
5126504 Hmmm, I might just do that, but you might have to wait a while. Maybe I'll write a sequel. Anyway, thanks
5125571 Thank you
5125531 Thanks so much
At first I was
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But then I went
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5127176 LOL thanks
nice little story
I can't call it great literature, but I wasn't expecting that with exactly 1K words. Still, it is much better than most stories on this site, as proven by everyone taking the time to point out the mistakes.
I was a little sad when it ended despite it being an appropriate place to stop and will be faving it in case you end up writing more.
Bug in description:
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5127774
Like a changeling?
rather unoriginal?I have never read anything like this
and I loved it have a like
ps: seuqel?
5127774 Oh, thanks for spotting that
5127739 I might write an epilogue, or a sequel.
5128048 Well, thank you
5128201 my advice would be to rewrite it in first or third person if you do a sequel. You'll be able to flesh it out easier
5128255 That sounds like a good idea. Self-insertion is okay for one-shots, but I think it could be kinda tiring for a longer story.
My constructive criticism about this story is that absolutely nothing is used about the changeling being, well, a changeling.
Imagine a baby -anything- substituted in the place of the changeling, and you'll see what I mean : It may as well be a baby -anything- because it doesn't affect anything else in the story in a meaningful way for it to be something else.
5128641 Hmm, I didn't think about that. Good point.
5129247 I'm considering a sequel, so there may transformations there.
Great short story, although it would serve better as a pilot chapter to a larger story
hint hint 
5130289 Well, with so many requests fro more, I might just do that
Preface: since no genders were assigned, I made "you" a guy and the changeling a girl.
At first we thought he would discover her after he had already attempted to lay down on the bed and got a face full of chitin, but being awake enough to detect unusual presence is acceptableacceptable too.
Poor pillow though, its softness will be missed.
Keep going! ;)
5132181 Wow, so many people want this to be continued, I might have to do something about it
Thanks for the fave BTW
5132198 No sequel...just continue to add to the story. suppose it'll work as a prologue, but you'll have to take the complete tag down.
By the by, it was quite adorable.
5133878 I'm not sure what I'm gonna do yet... But anyway, thanks!